Welcome to a new excerpt of DEMON SOUL for the Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.
Pre-Plot:
Brownie is a normal girl, or so she thinks. She likes to chat with her
sisters about random things, she likes fashion and she is member of the
fashion club at school. But one day, as her little brother gets really
sick because of a curse placed on him, she meets this really strange guy
who cures him absorbing the baby's sickness within himself. As he is
about to fall from his new acquired fever, Brownie sees Yue's soul and
immediately falls in love with him. But Yue is not a human, Yue is a
demon.
Brownie and Yue will built their love story until....
Plot:
Until Yue's soul is stolen. There is nothing left of their love. The
purple light dancing in Yue's grey eyes is gone. Forever? Not quite.
Brownie is desperate to find it back. And to get a soul stolen by
demons, she needs to go deep into dark magic! But Brownie is not a
witch, she is just looking for a spell powerful enough to bring her love
back. When an amateur starts playing with strong magic without
preparation and without caring for the consequences, things turn
wrong...
The house was quiet with everybody asleep or out hunting. She got up quietly. She had better get ready with the make up and weird smell, before the others woke up. She didn’t want to let them know that she was about to do something so foolish and dangerous.
“Don’t you come here
alone,” Yue had said.
It was too late to think
it over. Sometimes you needed to do things you were not supposed to
do. She knew from the day she fell in love with him that this
relationship was dangerous in itself.
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Oooo great excerpt! Loved the last two lines!
ReplyDeleteI love her attitude - this is a great character you're giving us. Terrific snippet, very revealing about who she is as a person.
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed the snippet and the reveal of her character and how her relationship is with Yue.
ReplyDeleteSo, she isn't in this for the glory of being a savior. That's the best kind of savior!
ReplyDeleteWisdom--sometimes you do have to do things you're not supposed to do. Good snippet!
ReplyDeleteWhat a strong girl. He tells her not to come alone, yet she does. She knows what she has to do.
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