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Wednesday, December 31, 2014

Hump Day hook 43


Welcome to a new Wednesday Hump Day Hook! If you want more of it, click here, amazing writers are waiting for you to read their hooks! 

I'm back at daily writing as I finished my reading challenge for 2014, 100 books read this year! You can see the list here
Anyway, as I'm still working on Fairy World, today, I'll let you as usual with a little part of Demon World unedited
Let's have some fun with Seti and Azazel again!

It is possible by using some particular Magick, to create attacks that slow down the healing process and even can reverse the healing process if Eather powers are to be used, which is what Seti tried to do making his injury grow even worse”, the teacher explained.
Because he can never think before acting”, Azazel said.
Because that’s a self conservation reflex, every demon has”, Seti answered, nobody likes to stay in pain.”
Well, you were just hurting yourself more”, Azazel answered.
That’s what I stopped and came here you dumbass”, Seti answered half sitting in his hammock reading for a fight.
How can they do that? And who are they and how do we protect ourselves from them if we can heal?” Sahel asked putting a closure to the ongoing fight.
Well”, the teacher said, “they are Watchers for sure, they probably derive from an old entity able to do Magick, a lot of demons can’t do that kind of Magick anymore, and until we question one of them there is no way to figure out what they used. Seti erased all traces with his Eather healing.”
Good job Einstein”, Azazel answered.
Einstein was human”, Seti replied sighting.
Yeah, I know”, Azazel said, grinning like if he had just created the worst insult of the century.
Seti sighted more and avoided looking at him, it was as if just looking at him, every time he was opening his mouth, or smiling or even just breathing, he wanted to jump to his throat and strangle him until complete annihilation. Just the thought of it made him smile, Azazel on the hard ground of the infirmary of the cave debating himself under him, trying to breath, desperately, thinking about breathing so much that he wouldn’t even think of using his powers, then finally using them to free himself while it was already too late and them it was just a race between his Eather powers and Azazel’s lungs, it was easy to see who would be the winner. The light would disappear in Azazel’s eyes and he would rest near his dead body laughing. Just now he wanted to laugh, it was the perfect fight and Azazel was dead. And he had become the guy who went to the infirmary cause he was so damn hurt, but still managed to kill one of the most powerful young demon in the block while being there. He would be famous, except that Azazel was not that powerful so the fame wouldn’t last long, but still, that would be something.
What are you smiling at, it’s not funny? They can come for us and wreak this entire place, there are a lot of kids here,” Sahel said.
I was thinking about something else totally enjoyable, sorry,” Seti said trying to become serious again.
Care to share,” Azazel said.
I’ll pass,” Seti answered the smile coming back on his face.
Azazel you’re dead,” Evalynn said.
What? What did I do again? I didn’t do or say anything!” Azazel exclaimed.
Seti just killed you in his mind,” she answered.

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Wednesday, December 24, 2014

Hump Day hook 42 and Christmas Special Free Books!


Welcome to a new Wednesday Hump Day Hook! If you want more of it, click here, amazing writers are waiting for you to read their hooks! 
 
Today I am having a giveaway! I know most of the giveaway are waiting for you to perform actions and to come back to the post to do the same sharing action the next day. Really, I'll be happy if you share this giveaway with everybody you can think of and everywhere you can but the real point of it is to give YOU a Christmas present.
 
But first, here is a little part of Demon World unedited!

Brownie was feeling uneasy, there were more demons here than she had ever seen in one single place and the smell of blood was starting to make her feel dizzy.
Let’s go home,” she said feebly, but Sahel pushed her to the shop’s door.
See, it says open on the door,” he said smiling.
He opened the door and pushed her inside.
What you want?” the women said, looking straight up at them with a defiant look.
It says open on the door,” Sahel answered.
Yeah,” she said going back to her task. 
She was cleaning the blood on the floor, Sahel looked at it, it was more than one demon worth of blood for sure, it was huge, as if the entire shop floor had been covered. She was busying herself trying to get the blood out with a dirty black broom and some kind of towel fixed at the end of it, but she only managed to spread it more and more around.
Just get what you need,” Sahel said in Brownie’s ear.
The woman looked up at him again.
What happened here?” he asked.
None of your business,” she answered starting to clean again, after a moment she straightens herself up and looked at him again. Sahel hadn’t stopped staring at her with inquisitive eyes. She passed a hand on her forehead, removing some hair from her face. She obviously wanted to talk, even though she knew it might not be safe.
Bloody hunters,” she said starting to clean again.
I’m not… a hunter,” Sahel said.
I could bet on that,” she said, looking at him again, “you’re a Nephil, I can smell the like of yours hundreds of kilometers away, you got guts to come here today, you should be hiding underground praying for the next storm to pass without reaching you.”

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Wednesday, December 17, 2014

Hump Day hook 41


Welcome to a new Wednesday Hump Day Hook!
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But first, here is a little part of Demon World unedited
 
Brownie just had a nightmare again.
 
But this time he was definitely entirely awake. He jumped on the bed and hugged her.
“He won’t come back again, those demons are too scared now, they won’t make the same mistake again, you were extremely courageous and you won, twice, they gave up, the demons are not all that brave and he is dead, remember, even if there was someone to come again, it would be one of his followers, it wouldn’t be him”, he said stroking her hair.
Maybe you’re right”, Brownie said, but she was still unconvinced. “She wasn’t sure what death meant anymore. She had seen so much, she had seen herself dying, she had seen it many times and felt it in many lives, she had seen Yue and Sahel being deprived of their soul and still stand, she knew vampires who were dead but still talking to you and moving and laughing as if they were alive, she didn’t know what death meant anymore. Was it possible that after death you were just going somewhere else from where you could come back under certain conditions, what if that demon, the master, had managed to do it, to still be alive?
It scares me, I can’t help it”, she added a bit defensively.
I know, when I’m scared I can’t control it either”, Sahel said.
Are you scared sometimes?” Brownie asked.
 
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Wednesday, December 10, 2014

Hump Day Hook 40


Welcome to a new Wednesday Hump Day Hook!
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But first, here is a little part of Demon World unedited!

She wasn’t the girl she used to be anymore, she would just stay there as a reminder, she was staying with those girls after class talking about makeup and reading fashion magazine just because it was the only thing that was still making her feel normal, feel like her old self. 
“You girl, really have a huge problem, I would say a huge identity crisis”, she said out loud to the mirror. 
“Can I be the old me and the new me, simultaneously?” she asked as if she was asking her reflection for permission.
 She passed her hand under the tape and let them fill up with warm water. She liked the sensation of the water on her skin, she always had. She passed the water on her face. It was feeling good, too good! She decided to undress and to get in the shower. When she was taking a shower, her thoughts were generally running high, giving her new ideas. 
“I need to take care of myself and myself only, Sahel will be ok, he wasn’t in the dream, they won’t reach him, I need to take care of myself, I need to make myself happy again. My main problem is, I don’t know what can make me happy now. No matter what I do, it’s never enough, no matter what Sahel do, it’s never enough either. If we could understand each other better… but that won’t happen until I discover what I want. What do I want? What do I want?” 

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Wednesday, December 3, 2014

Hump Day Hook 39


Welcome to a new Wednesday Hump Day Hook! 
If you want more of it, click here, amazing writers are waiting for you to read their hooks! 

But first, here is a little part of Demon World unedited, I won NaNoWriMo already, but I'm not finished with the draft of Fairy World, so I joined NaNoFiMo. I don't know how regularly I'll be writing for it though. The goal is to finish Fairy World's draft. 
Today meet Seti and Azazel. Enjoy!


I have never met such an idiot in my entire life!” Azazel explained, yelling with the loudest voice he could just near Seti’s ear.
Seti jumped aside, holding his ears. Demon’s ears were ultra sensitive and raising the decibels could be very painful.
Shut the hell up,” he yelled back at Azazel.
They seemed to hate each other and couldn’t stop fighting at least verbally as soon as they were in the same room.
But seriously, why the hell did you go back home, again, I mean it’s not like you don’t have like two very safe places to stay at,” Azazel answered again.
It’s not like I can’t fix things forever,” Seti answered.
It’s not like your family ever cared,” Azazel said.
It’s not like you ever had one,” Seti answered. 
That was too much and he knew it, but he couldn’t help himself, the more he was hurting Azazel, the better he felt.
It’s not like yours ever tried to kill you, at least mine didn’t,” Azazel answered.
Whatever!” Seti said, giving up the debate.
The fact was, Azazel was right, even if it would have killed him to admit it.

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Wednesday, November 26, 2014

Hump Day Hook 38

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Welcome to a new Wednesday Hump Day Hook!
If you want more of it, click here, amazing writers are waiting for you to read their hooks!
 
But first, here is a little part of Demon World unedited, I won NaNoWriMo already but I'm not finished with the draft of Fairy World, so I'll keep on writing and in the meantime you keep on getting little part of what happened before. This is in Brownie POV just at the start of the book.
Enjoy!
  
I wasn’t born a witch, I taught myself, alone, out of necessity. I was a beginner witch, and I feel like I still am, when I cast all those spells and they were dark. I didn’t mean to cast dark Magick spells, but I was dealing with demons and they were so much more powerful than me and there was so many of them, there was no way I could just wish to a star and wait. I needed help and the books I found were not meant for soft hearted people. The more you try the better you become and I tried a lot, too hard, too fast and the energy that I put in those spells was the energy of despair. Therefore, I brought despair to the universe, from inside out. Despair was my most powerful energy at that time, of course I was sad, immensely sad, but sadness is something that goes away with enough tears, despair is something that eats you inside. Despair leads to frustration, to the will of only staying in bed all day and wait for your death because you’re not strong enough to kill yourself anyway. I was desperate, but I couldn’t stay in bed. Every day I had to contemplate my happiness flying away from me, day by day with all Yue’s memories of me until he and I became complete stranger. I was clinging to an empty shell, a body without a soul. 


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Wednesday, November 19, 2014

Hump Day Hook 37

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Welcome to a new Wednesday Hump Day Hook!
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But first, here is a little part of Demon World unedited, as I'm now writing book 5 of the series for NaNoWriMo with daily draft upload I thought it might be a good idea to show you tibits of the entire series. It's time for you to meet the three demons from the North.
Enjoy!
  
Lonan jumped on the bed.
Why don’t we have hammock?” he asked.
That’s the question I was going to ask,” Torsti answered, “It’s as if that place had been built by humans.”
It had been built by humans,” Odeon answered.
How do you know that?” Loki asked. He was always amazed by Odeon’s knowledge, Odeon knew everything.
About some sixty years ago, there was a terrible war in the Human World, the Human World back then resembled a bit the Demon World now. People were not safe, they were running everywhere in the night, hiding things from each others, hiding from their neighbor, hiding from their government, hiding from the police. One of them stood up and decided to classify people, to tell everyone where the threat was coming from, he wanted people to hate each other and their fear was serving his own purpose and he became powerful, very powerful in the Human World a lot of people were following him, either because they were too afraid to resist or because they were agreeing with him. That’s what had lead people to have secrets, people wanted to escape from him, but his territory was always increasing, so one of us had an idea. He decided to help him, he created a wonderful plan to be able to kill as many humans as possible, he opened a route from one of the Human World’s forest to this forest and kept it invisible from that man and his followers. Then a lot of desperate humans arrived in this inhabited part of the Demon World and created their home in caves like this, this is not the only one around, just they are pretty difficult to find.”
Then what happened to the humans? Why are they not here anymore?” Lonan asked.
Because humans are really, really fun to play with but are really, really easy to break”, Torsti answered. 
 
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Wednesday, November 12, 2014

Hump Day Hook 36

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Welcome to a new Wednesday Hump Day Hook!
If you want more of it, click here, amazing writers are waiting for you to read their hooks!
But first, here is a little part of Demon World unedited, as I'm now writing book 5 of the series for NaNoWriMo with daily draft upload I thought it might be a good idea to show you tibits of the entire series. It's time for you to meet Yue, he is maybe my character with the most tragic destiny, nothing good really ever happens to Yue... Really.
Enjoy!
 
You’re late again Yue, how many times do I have to tell you that breakfast starts at seven”, a thin older man said putting his hand on his arm.
Yue pushed him away violently.
And how many times do I have to tell you that I can’t get up in the morning”, he answered, looking at the man from above, he was about one head taller and his black eyes were intimidating.
The man sighed and walked away. Other demons around were laughing. Yue took a plate and walked to one of the table in the corner.
Move”, he said.
The three younger demons sitting there stood up in a hurry and ran away with their plate as soon as they could.
Always in such a good mood in the morning”, another demon said, sitting on the rock in front of him. He put his glass of water upside down on the table, locking the water inside. Yue swiped the glass away with one blow making it explode into thousands of pieces on the next table.
The other demon laughed.
It’s my table”, he said, “get lost.”
As a Nephil, you should be a little more polite”, the demon in front of him said his hair, dressing up on his head and taking a strange dark blue color. “What if someone decides to kill you in your sleep?”
Yue looked at him, without rising up his face, his all black eyes near to his eyebrow.
They can always try”, he said with a menacing deep rocky voice.
The other demon laughed again.
If you’re so strong, prove it, some people are starting to think that it’s just an attitude you are giving yourself”, he said.
What people are saying is irrelevant, not my problem”, Yue said.
Let’s verify then, I’ll beat the shit out of you”, the demon said smashing Yue’s plate as strongly as he had smashed the glass of water and making it fly to the next table before standing up.
Yue stood up slowly, pushing himself up with both hands on the table. He was carrying is head bent over his left shoulder, slightly showing his neck to his opponent, still looking toward the table with a grin on his face.
Bring it on”, he said finally looking up.
The round black shape in the middle of his eyes had changed to the shape of flames dancing slowly. A bowl of boiling water was growing in the hand of the other demon, it reached Yue straight in the face vaporizing in the air and hiding Yue’s face in white smoke. The demon started to laugh.
How pathetic you couldn’t even ditch….” He started, but he didn’t have time to finish his sentence that Yue had projected himself against him, pushing him hard on the rocky wall of the cave, carrying him up with a hand around his neck.
He shook his head, making the water stuck in his hair hit the face of the other demon burning him.
Trash like you don’t measure up”, Yue said softly.


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Wednesday, November 5, 2014

Hump Day Hook 35

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Welcome to a new Wednesday Hump Day Hook!
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But first, here is a little part of Demon World unedited, as I'm now writing book 5 of the series for NaNoWriMo with daily draft upload I thought it might be a good idea to show you tibits of the entire series. Brownie is held prisoner in the Demon World, which is probably the most sucking situation one can get in. And in her cell, she is not alone, but Kion is a bit... weird.
Enjoy!
 
The boy was humming again, more loudly than before, more strongly, he seemed to be really annoyed as if something had been bothering him all along.
Are you ok? Can we talk?” Brownie said louder than she wanted to.
She was exasperated by the never ending melody.
I’m exasperated too,” the boy said before going back to his humming.
How do you know what I think?” Brownie said amazed. She didn’t know if he was an ally or an enemy, but she needed information.
Neither of both,” the boy answered.
So what are you doing here?” Brownie asked.
She knew she was never going to get an answer straight from him.
You better take care of yourself than take care of me and start by getting the hell out of my head,” the boy said.
We’ll go out of it, together, you and I we’ll both get out of here alive and…” Brownie started.
No, we won’t, you know that and I know that too,” the boy said.
Yes, she knew it, there was only a very small chance for her to get out of here and that only chance was for Sahel to arrive before she gave them the formula. She looked around searching for the boy in the darkness, unable to find him.
No, I don’t know the formula yet,” he said.
When you know it, will you give it to them?” she asked.
Even if I don’t want to they will take it from me, we both know that,” the boy said.
Then all I have to do is not to remember it,” Brownie said.
The boy started humming louder than ever and Brownie understood why. His melody was making interference with her thoughts forcing them to turn in a loop, he was helping her not to remember.


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Wednesday, October 29, 2014

Hump Day Hook 34

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Welcome to a new Wednesday Hump Day Hook!
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But first, here is a little part of Demon World unedited, which still doesn't have a real title. The portal to every hell level is still open in the living room and the vampires don't seem to take it as seriously as they should be, at least from a demon or human point of view. Demon is the third, still unpublished book in my demon series.
Enjoy!



“Hum, I think we are going to have some company,” Viorel said going back to look at the map and consciously folding it. 
“That’s all! I told you that there is a bunch of demons ready to kill everyone on the loose and the only thing you have to say is: “We are going to have some company”? Close the damn thing,” Evalynn answered. 
“I kind of agree with her on this one,” Gideon said. 
Suddenly, he wasn’t so inclined to go to the demon world anymore, after all, their ability to even keep the house safe had been tested a lot today and now it was failing. 
“That’s your chance to go get Brownie in the Demon World, and you can give your little gift to your boyfriend, please be my guests”, Viorel said. 
Dylan smirked. Vampire humor, you had to like it, but he knew that Viorel was really pissed off and that it was better not to get in his way now. 
“If you think I’m going to enter that thing…” Evalynn started, but she was interrupted when something actually came out. 
The creature was really small and his skin was a deep orange, he had huge, hairless rabbit-like ears on the top of his head, which seemed to be rotating on themselves as to capture where the noise was coming from. 
“What the hell is that?” Dylan said laughing. 
“It’s cute”, Daciana answered. “Can I keep it?”



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Wednesday, October 22, 2014

Hump Day Hook 33

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Welcome to a new Wednesday Hump Day Hook!
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But first, here is a little part of my parallel world travel story which still doesn't have a real title. It's a little rough and unedited as the first draft isn't finished yet. I hope you won't get too confused Frederic is not really being herself. You better get used to that too, she does it a lot. 
Enjoy! 
 
 
 
 
"Captain, have you lost your mind," the older man said. "With all due respect..."
"Whenever someone starts a sentence with that formula, I'm not sure how much respect is left," I said standing up.
The others seemed to take it as being dismissed. The older man stood up and looked at me.
"Nobody, ever, in this ship or another defied the protocol, do you think that because your father," he started.
"This has nothing to do with my father," I said.
Everything about my father had always been a bit touchy even if my father and the captain father were possibly different, I still had trouble with the father part of our life.
The man turned around to leave. It was just me in the room and two other women, sitting on some sort of motorcycle without tires in front of screens. It looked like a video game, but it wasn't. Behind their analytic screen was a larger one. A glass panel. I walked around the room to come closer to it. Millions of stars all around.
 
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