Welcome to a new excerpt for the Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.
When Demon Soul first came out, it wasn't really in it's best form.
It is the first book of my Demon Series and the First book of The House at The Crossing cluster. I have written a lot of the other books in the series, I have about 6 so far, but I haven't gone to publishing them mostly because I wasn't happy with the quality of Demon Soul and Demon and Fairy. So I wanted to have something that look better and that I could be proud of before getting the other books out.
I decided to redo Demon Soul with a brand new edit and a brand new cover.
The book is almost ready and the professional cover should arrive next month so I though I could start here with a few snippet until the cover reveal and the new publishing.
Enjoy!
It
was a dark day following a dark week and Brownie already knew that
Yue would leave. She had been fighting it for weeks now but it was
too late. Even if she could save him, his love was already dead. His
love for her left with his memory changing. Brownie watched him leave
for the last time with tears falling from her eyes. She knew that he
wasn't the one she fell in love with, and that he was a completely
different person, unable to love her anymore. But those thoughts
didn't make it easier. Seeing Yue walk away from her again reminded
her of her vain quest to bring him back.
Check out my new book and writing related youtube channel: Write Read Live
Follow my blog with Bloglovin
Find us on Google+
Intriguing start. Makes me want to know more about them.
ReplyDeleteThanks
DeleteA new book from you -- I'm looking forward to it, Linda!
ReplyDeleteMore like an old one revisited. ;) Thanks.
DeleteThis is an intriguing start- makes me wonder what came before.
ReplyDeleteThat will come really slowly.
DeleteA sad beginning.
ReplyDeleteYes, I haven't described the weather but I'm pretty sure it's raining too.
DeleteAwww, sad but that's because you really hit us effectively with your words...well done excerpt! Interesting to read the update you shared on your earlier books. Best wishes!
ReplyDeleteWonderful! I am intrigued. Has he been possessed by something? How sad--that the person he's become is not in love with her...
ReplyDeleteGreat beginning. Raises all kinds of questions that will make the reader turn the page.
ReplyDelete