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Sunday, September 3, 2017

WeWriWar 222: Rainbow catcher



Welcome to a new excerpt of Rainbow Catcher for the Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.

Now let's go back to our story.

Summary of previous episodes: Clarissa is coughing and wanted to watch Everett Cooper on TV but Jason refused, she is due to get her rainbow the next day but she seems scared, to make her feel better Jason leave the TV on. Clarissa tried to explain about rainbows, she is a big fan of Everett Cooper but Jason is not too sure about it. Clarissa complained about her dialophone but Jason needs to go to work. Before completely leaving he is thinking about getting her her rainbow. We flashed back to the meeting Jason had with a rainbow seller at the black market. Jason left Clarissa's room to go to work. Jason was talking to his boss about the rainbow coming the next day. Jason prepared the money for the rainbow in a sport bag and went to the hospital. The rainbow seller arrived for the delivery. But it was a scam and Jason prepares to go get the rainbow himself in the desert. Markus has a last surprise for him.

We start just where we left off last week.


He didn’t want to stay too long. The look they threw at him showed that they were either not used to strangers or at least not to strangers arriving alone. The only thing making this village viable was the weekly arrival of the bus. That’s how Jason realized that he had gone very far away from Polysky city already.

He took some oil on a shelf and walked to the counter, he wanted to go away from here as soon as possible. He ordered a drink, just water. The man behind the counter gave him a strange look. He had the hugest hands Jason had ever seen in his life, they looked incredibly flat as if they had been stuck somewhere with a lot of weight on them.

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6 comments:

  1. Doesn't sound like a very friendly place... The people are making me nervous.

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  2. I wonder what the significance of the flat hands is.

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  3. Great imagery of the people. I'm curious to know more.

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  4. I hate being the recipient of strange looks. It happens all too frequently.

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  5. Not sure if my first comment published or not so I'm repeating it. Those strange looks make me think the natives may not be very friendly.

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  6. Doesn't sound like an inviting place. And i wonder about the hands ...

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