Kallisto
blushed and looked at the sky briefly. Seti blushed too. Was she
really able to see him or was she just hoping for him to be here? In
both cases, he felt insanely happy.
“If
you loved me you wouldn’t look at me the way you do,” she said.
“And
how would I look at you?” Kelpie answered getting annoyed with her
girl’s nonsense.
“You
would be looking at me just like he…” She paused realizing that
she almost said it.
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Uh-oh! She almost spilled the beans there. :) This is a charming excerpt.
ReplyDeleteOh-oh! Here comes trouble;). Sweet snippet.
ReplyDeleteOn another note, I love the four-leaf clover, but it makes it incredibly difficult to read the blog. Just something to keep in mind;).
Are they about to make some progress here?
ReplyDeleteBut is "he" Seti?
ReplyDeleteSaved at the last second! Nearly spit it out. :-) Good snippet, Linda. And I LOVE your falling shamrocks. :-)
ReplyDeleteInteresting bit.
ReplyDeleteAre you head-hopping on purpose? Three times in three sentences is a lot.
Fun story.
Interesting bit. :-)
ReplyDeleteAre you heading hopping on purpose? Three times in three paragraphs is a bit much.
Fun story.
Hope Seti was listening closely. :)
ReplyDeleteUh-oh... If Kelpie caught onto what she almost said things could get... "interesting."
ReplyDeleteOoo, Ooo, say it! Don't leave us hanging. ;)
ReplyDeleteOh so cute. He's gonna get the idea that he means something to her for sure : )
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