WeWriWar 84 Demon and Fairy

Hello everyone and welcome to a new excerpt of Demon and Fairy for the  Week-end Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday. 

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In the previous episodes: Seti let the chaos got out of him as the father of his sister's fiance threaten to break the engagement. Wild, he flies to the beach to see the only person near whom he can get rid of the Chaos without pain, the fairy Kallisto in the Human world below his. He can only observe her through a tidal pool. But this time, she is in danger. Trying to rescue her from a snake, Seti lands in the world below. However, as Kallisto tries to touch him, he flies away back to his hidden place on the beach and listen to Kallisto's conversation with her best friend Kelpie who once again proposes to her and is refused. Kallisto needs to choose between Kelpie or going back to the fairy world to marry prince Kordelius. As the night comes, Kallisto goes home and so does Seti and of course his parents are all weird... (Remember, Seti used his forbidden power and left without an explanation... ) Then Seti was mysteriously pushed in his room, in the dark and apparently turned blind. For the past few weeks, Seti is trying to control the Chaos who wants to take over his body. We had some flash back to explain the relationship between Seti and the Chaos. Now Seti seems to be in control again but for how long?

Here are my 8 sentences, we start where we left off last week. Now that the Chaos has calmed down, Seti is looking for the way out. 

Seti felt the sweat run along his temple, it was becoming really hot. The wall was mostly made of wood. The carbon composing it was burning easily in the air’s oxygen. 

“I love chemistry. It’s funny to know that what I’m apparently magically doing is really possible,” Seti thought smiling. 

The size of the hole in the wall was slowly increasing. The sunlight was coming from the corridor’s window. 

“Could I do something more creative? This fire without flam is really killing me,” Seti thought, but the headache struck again blurring his vision. 

Answer to last week's comments

Seti thinks he can control it but as soon as the Chaos is close by, he gets a headache, the Chaos has a plan on his own. 

If you remember, the first time Seti used the Chaos in front of people to make a crazy sculpture out of his sister's soon to be father-in-law's desk, he had a huge headache afterward. He can call the Chaos and use it for a limited time, but there is no saying what the Chaos has in mind, you know, it's chaotic at best.

Personally, I would have chosen another power to get out, but Seti tends to be too confident in his chaos, because the chaos is what makes him so special (and at him locked in the room to begin with.) Seti is not always that smart, but hush, don't tell him I said that. ;)

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WeWriWar 83 Demon and Fairy

Hello everyone and welcome to a new excerpt of Demon and Fairy for the  Week-end Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday. 

In the previous episodes: Seti let the chaos got out of him as the father of his sister's fiance threaten to break the engagement. Wild, he flies to the beach to see the only person near whom he can get rid of the Chaos without pain, the fairy Kallisto in the Human world below his. He can only observe her through a tidal pool. But this time, she is in danger. Trying to rescue her from a snake, Seti lands in the world below. However, as Kallisto tries to touch him, he flies away back to his hidden place on the beach and listen to Kallisto's conversation with her best friend Kelpie who once again proposes to her and is refused. Kallisto needs to choose between Kelpie or going back to the fairy world to marry prince Kordelius. As the night comes, Kallisto goes home and so does Seti and of course his parents are all weird... (Remember, Seti used his forbidden power and left without an explanation... ) Then Seti was mysteriously pushed in his room, in the dark and apparently turned blind. For the past few weeks, Seti is trying to control the Chaos who wants to take over his body. We had some flash back to explain the relationship between Seti and the Chaos. Now Seti seems to be in control again.

Here are my 8 sentences, we start where we left off last week. Now that the Chaos has calmed down, Seti is looking for the way out. 

“Protective barrier only on the exits, they shouldn’t be underestimating me,” he said. “Well, I know how to get out of here quietly, but it has been too quiet, let’s give them what they are asking for.”
He took a deep breath and put the candle on the floor then changed his mind. He walk back to the guitar, blow the candle and hide it inside again, just in case they decided to have a look inside his room before locking him up again. He walked back to the door stumbling on some books. Some days having a tidy room could have been useful. He put his hands on the door and moved them to find the border. Then he called the Chaos. He focused his energy on the border and the wall started to move, the molecules reorganizing themselves until a hole appeared. 

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WeWriWar 82 Demon and Fairy

Hello everyone and welcome to a new excerpt of Demon and Fairy for the  Week-end Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday. 


In the previous episodes: Seti let the chaos got out of him as the father of his sister's fiance threaten to break the engagement. Wild, he flies to the beach to see the only person near whom he can get rid of the Chaos without pain, the fairy Kallisto in the Human world below his. He can only observe her through a tidal pool. But this time, she is in danger. Trying to rescue her from a snake, Seti lands in the world below. However, as Kallisto tries to touch him, he flies away back to his hidden place on the beach and listen to Kallisto's conversation with her best friend Kelpie who once again proposes to her and is refused. Kallisto needs to choose between Kelpie or going back to the fairy world to marry prince Kordelius. As the night comes, Kallisto goes home and so does Seti and of course his parents are all weird... (Remember, Seti used his forbidden power and left without an explanation... ) Then Seti was mysteriously pushed in his room, in the dark and apparently turned blind. For the past few weeks, Seti is trying to control the Chaos who wants to take over his body. We had some flash back to explain the relationship between Seti and the Chaos. Now Seti seems to be in control again.

Here are my 8 sentences, we start where we left off last week. Now that the Chaos has calmed down, Seti is looking for the way out. 

He heard his stomach crawl.
“How long have I been here already, are they going to feed me or are they planning to keep me starve to death?”
He wondered how long it would take to die this way.
He passed his hand on the wall where the window should have been. There was a difference of temperature between the normal part of the wall and the magical part. It was really a tiny difference, but it would be enough.
“Don’t tell me that they are that stupid,” he said.
He crossed the room to go to the door and slid his fingertips on the border between the wall and the place where the door should have been. It was the same. The door’s temperature was slightly higher than the temperature of the walls around. 

Answer to last week comments.

You'll see soon how Seti is going to get out. Things tend to be easier when the Chaos doesn't get in the way. The problem is how long is it going to stay quiet?

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WeWriWar 81 Demon and Fairy

Hello everyone and welcome to a new excerpt of Demon and Fairy for the  Week-end Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday. 


In the previous episodes: Seti let the chaos got out of him as the father of his sister's fiance threaten to break the engagement. Wild, he flies to the beach to see the only person near whom he can get rid of the Chaos without pain, the fairy Kallisto in the Human world below his. He can only observe her through a tidal pool. But this time, she is in danger. Trying to rescue her from a snake, Seti lands in the world below. However, as Kallisto tries to touch him, he flies away back to his hidden place on the beach and listen to Kallisto's conversation with her best friend Kelpie who once again proposes to her and is refused. Kallisto needs to choose between Kelpie or going back to the fairy world to marry prince Kordelius. As the night comes, Kallisto goes home and so does Seti and of course his parents are all weird... (Remember, Seti used his forbidden power and left without an explanation... ) Then Seti was mysteriously pushed in his room, in the dark and apparently turned blind. For the past few weeks, Seti is trying to control the Chaos who wants to take over his body. We had some flash back to explain the relationship between Seti and the Chaos. Now Seti seems to be in control again.

Here are my 8 sentences, we start where we left off last week. Now that the Chaos has calmed down, Seti is looking for the way out. 

And today “They” probably said that he couldn’t control the Chaos and that he should be locked up in his room in the dark. As if “they” knew something. He knew the truth. He knew that he shouldn’t have been born in the first place but he was here because his parent transgressed the rules, and “They” decided that his parents were good enough to keep and educate him. At the same time he had been practicing with the Chaos’ powers in secret and it was the reason why he had allowed it to go out today because he knew that he wouldn’t hurt anyone. The twin’s father also really needed a lesson. It was simple as long as he was using the Chaos, it was safe, if nobody interfered; it was alright. But if the Chaos was using him, he couldn’t guaranty anyone’s security. He didn’t want to touch people just in case, but maybe if he had he would have proven it was safe. 

“How am I going to get out of here?”

Answer to last week comments.

You will know who they are in time but even once you know you still have a lot of unsuspected mystery to go on with.
 

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WeWriWar 80 Demon and Fairy

Hello everyone and welcome to a new excerpt of Demon and Fairy for the  Week-end Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday. 


In the previous episodes: Seti let the chaos got out of him as the father of his sister's fiance threaten to break the engagement. Wild, he flies to the beach to see the only person near whom he can get rid of the Chaos without pain, the fairy Kallisto in the Human world below his. He can only observe her through a tidal pool. But this time, she is in danger. Trying to rescue her from a snake, Seti lands in the world below. However, as Kallisto tries to touch him, he flies away back to his hidden place on the beach and listen to Kallisto's conversation with her best friend Kelpie who once again proposes to her and is refused. Kallisto needs to choose between Kelpie or going back to the fairy world to marry prince Kordelius. As the night comes, Kallisto goes home and so does Seti and of course his parents are all weird... (Remember, Seti used his forbidden power and left without an explanation... ) Then Seti was mysteriously pushed in his room, in the dark and apparently turned blind. For the past few weeks, Seti is trying to control the Chaos who wants to take over his body. We had some flash back to explain the relationship between Seti and the Chaos. Now Seti seems to be in control again.

Here are my 8 sentences, we start where we left off last week. Now that the Chaos has calmed down, Seti is looking for the way out. 

He held the candle up and looked around. Everything seemed pretty normal, except for the door without a handle and the window. He walked toward the space where the window had been but it was gone. His parents were unable to do that alone, maybe it was an idea of the twin’s father or maybe it was those people who had forbidden them to tell him the truth. He had never seen them, he wasn’t even supposed to know about them, but he had heard a conversation between his father and one of his teachers. His father always called them, “they”. “They” said my son should be able to attend the class if he stays in the back and if nobody comes closer than five meters from him. “They” said that he should go out of the room only for going home. “They” said… “They” always had so much to say about him.

Answer to last week comments.

It's getting weirder, isn't it? Are sure it was Seti's parents locking him up? Or was that just Seti's assumptions? ;) I know I'm evil not letting you know everything, but Seti doesn't know everything either.

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WeWriWar 79 Demon and Fairy

Hello everyone and welcome to a new excerpt of Demon and Fairy for the  Week-end Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday. 


In the previous episodes: Seti let the chaos got out of him as the father of his sister's fiance threaten to break the engagement. Wild, he flies to the beach to see the only person near whom he can get rid of the Chaos without pain, the fairy Kallisto in the Human world below his. He can only observe her through a tidal pool. But this time, she is in danger. Trying to rescue her from a snake, Seti lands in the world below. However, as Kallisto tries to touch him, he flies away back to his hidden place on the beach and listen to Kallisto's conversation with her best friend Kelpie who once again proposes to her and is refused. Kallisto needs to choose between Kelpie or going back to the fairy world to marry prince Kordelius. As the night comes, Kallisto goes home and so does Seti and of course his parents are all weird... (Remember, Seti used his forbidden power and left without an explanation... ) Then Seti was mysteriously pushed in his room, in the dark and apparently turned blind. For the past few weeks, Seti is trying to control the Chaos who wants to take over his body. We had some flash back to explain the relationship between Seti and the Chaos. Now Seti seems to be in control again.

Here are my 8 sentences, we start where we left off last week. Now that the Chaos has calmed down, Seti is looking for the way out. 

“I was sure it was there,” he said smiling. 
Whoever would have been looking for something in his room would never have found it. The only thing to be found here was the Chaos. But Seti knew exactly where to find his stuff. He transferred his fire to the candle. The light seemed to propagate normally. Magic only hiding magic, but once on the candle, the fire was just fire, so basic, his parents weren’t good enough if they had left a candle in his room. Or did they want him to escape? 

Answer to last week comments.

Nah, Seti is not going to play the guitar, he can't leave the cords on it, music is too tidy for him, that's explained somewhere in the book. He still would love to. At the same time being locked against his will in his room, I don't think music is his first priority. But don't worry, there are music later in the book.

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WeWriWar 78 Demon and Fairy

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Welcome to Week-end Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday. I'm almost done with NaNoWriMo, only about 3500 words left to write. I'll be uploading the next part of the draft soon tonight or tomorrow so you can go have a look if you are interested (Warming: it's start pretty chaotic if you haven't read Blue Angel which draft is also uploaded).
 

In the previous episodes: Seti let the chaos got out of him as the father of his sister's fiance threaten to break the engagement. Wild, he flies to the beach to see the only person near whom he can get rid of the Chaos without pain, the fairy Kallisto in the Human world below his. He can only observe her through a tidal pool. But this time, she is in danger. Trying to rescue her from a snake, Seti lands in the world below. However, as Kallisto tries to touch him, he flies away back to his hidden place on the beach and listen to Kallisto's conversation with her best friend Kelpie who once again proposes to her and is refused. Kallisto needs to choose between Kelpie or going back to the fairy world to marry prince Kordelius. As the night comes, Kallisto goes home and so does Seti and of course his parents are all weird... (Remember, Seti used his forbidden power and left without an explanation... ) Then Seti was mysteriously pushed in his room, in the dark and apparently turned blind. For the past few weeks, Seti is trying to control the Chaos who wants to take over his body. Now we are having some flash back to explain the relationship between Seti and the Chaos. 
  

Here are my 8 sentences, we start where we left off last week. Now that the Chaos has calmed down, Seti is looking for the way out.
 

“I could have done it ages ago if the Chaos hadn’t been messing around with my head. I wouldn’t even be locked up if it hadn’t decided to be a pain just at the wrong moment,” Seti thought and sighed.

He moved the flame around him carefully. The darkness seemed to be absorbing his fire. He made it bigger and stood up to go grab the guitar with his free hand. He shook it a bit.

“Yes,” he said happily.

He shook a bit more and a candle went out through the hole.

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WeWriWar 77 Demon and Fairy

Hello Everyone!

Welcome to Week-end Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday. You probably noticed that I'm a bit late for NaNoWriMo, damn that headache I can't seem to get rid of properly (5 days so far). I'll be uploading the next part of the draft soon so you can go have a look if you are interested (Warming: it's start pretty chaotic if you haven't read Blue Angel which draft is also uploaded).

In the previous episodes: Seti let the chaos got out of him as the father of his sister's fiance threaten to break the engagement. Wild, he flies to the beach to see the only person near whom he can get rid of the Chaos without pain, the fairy Kallisto in the Human world below his. He can only observe her through a tidal pool. But this time, she is in danger. Trying to rescue her from a snake, Seti lands in the world below. However, as Kallisto tries to touch him, he flies away back to his hidden place on the beach and listen to Kallisto's conversation with her best friend Kelpie who once again proposes to her and is refused. Kallisto needs to choose between Kelpie or going back to the fairy world to marry prince Kordelius. As the night comes, Kallisto goes home and so does Seti and of course his parents are all weird... (Remember, Seti used his forbidden power and left without an explanation... ) Then Seti was mysteriously pushed in his room, in the dark and apparently turned blind. For the past few weeks, Seti is trying to control the Chaos who wants to take over his body. Now we are having some flash back to explain the relationship between Seti and the Chaos. 
  

Here are my 8 sentences, we start where we left off last week. We are out of the flashback.
 

And this time it was the same.
“Fighting against my true nature is hurting me,” Seti thought, “What can this possibly mean?”
This was now his new question. The Chaos was releasing him slowly. The headache was calming down, but he felt exhausted.
“I fight against myself and I’m always, winning in the end,” Seti thought yawning.
He took a few deep breaths before sitting up. He tried to remember where he had put the candles, he knew he had some, he just hoped that they didn’t take them away. He waited until the Chaos completely disappeared deep inside him and then waited a bit more. He put his hand in front of him and called for the fire. Slowly a white flame emerged from his hand.

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WeWriWar 76 Demon and Fairy

Hello everyone!

Welcome to Week-end Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday. NaNoWriMo started and I'm writing the 5th book in the Series. I know, only Demon Soul and Demon and Fairy are out but I already have full drafts for Demon World and Blue Angel and at the end of Blue Angel, the demons got stuck in the Fairy World and I can promise you they really hate that. I'll be uploading the draft on a daily basis so you can go have a look if you are interested (Warming: it's start pretty chaotic if you haven't read Blue Angel which draft is also uploaded) .

In the previous episodes: Seti let the chaos got out of him as the father of his sister's fiance threaten to break the engagement. Wild, he flies to the beach to see the only person near whom he can get rid of the Chaos without pain, the fairy Kallisto in the Human world below his. He can only observe her through a tidal pool. But this time, she is in danger. Trying to rescue her from a snake, Seti lands in the world below. However, as Kallisto tries to touch him, he flies away back to his hidden place on the beach and listen to Kallisto's conversation with her best friend Kelpie who once again proposes to her and is refused. Kallisto needs to choose between Kelpie or going back to the fairy world to marry prince Kordelius. As the night comes, Kallisto goes home and so does Seti and of course his parents are all weird... (Remember, Seti used his forbidden power and left without an explanation... ) Then Seti was mysteriously pushed in his room, in the dark and apparently turned blind. For the past few weeks, Seti is trying to control the Chaos who wants to take over his body. Now we are having some flash back to explain the relationship between Seti and the Chaos. 

Here are my 8 sentences, we start where we left off last week. Here is the end of the conversation between Seti and his father.
 

He ran to the bathroom to put them under running water, but it didn’t change anything. The Chaos was in his head and wanted to get out. His father came with the broomstick to get him to his room, as if he knew that something was happening. Seti didn’t care he just gave up every hopes and walked to his room. At that moment, the Chaos had stopped yelling and tried to be friend.

“Be friends,” the thought made Seti laugh, shaking his head a bit too much.

But what the Chaos had said that day he would always remember.

“Maybe it is time for you to know who you really are,” those were the exact words of the Chaos and after saying that it had left. Seti thought about the meaning of the words every day before falling asleep.

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