Welcome to Week-end Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday. You probably noticed that I'm a bit late for NaNoWriMo, damn that headache I can't seem to get rid of properly (5 days so far). I'll be uploading the next part of the draft soon so you can go have a look if you are interested (Warming: it's start pretty chaotic if you haven't read Blue Angel which draft is also uploaded).
Here are my 8 sentences, we start where we left off last week. We are out of the flashback.
And this time it was the same.
“Fighting against my true nature is hurting me,” Seti thought, “What can this possibly mean?”
This was now his new question. The Chaos was releasing him slowly. The headache was calming down, but he felt exhausted.
“I fight against myself and I’m always, winning in the end,” Seti thought yawning.
He took a few deep breaths before sitting up. He tried to remember where he had put the candles, he knew he had some, he just hoped that they didn’t take them away. He waited until the Chaos completely disappeared deep inside him and then waited a bit more. He put his hand in front of him and called for the fire. Slowly a white flame emerged from his hand.
“Fighting against my true nature is hurting me,” Seti thought, “What can this possibly mean?”
This was now his new question. The Chaos was releasing him slowly. The headache was calming down, but he felt exhausted.
“I fight against myself and I’m always, winning in the end,” Seti thought yawning.
He took a few deep breaths before sitting up. He tried to remember where he had put the candles, he knew he had some, he just hoped that they didn’t take them away. He waited until the Chaos completely disappeared deep inside him and then waited a bit more. He put his hand in front of him and called for the fire. Slowly a white flame emerged from his hand.
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I wonder why his parents are the way they are? I like the image of the "white flame". Good 8, Linda! :-)
ReplyDeleteOh Seti, I always feel so bad for you.
ReplyDeleteIt sounds of if things are about to get better for him. It's time.
ReplyDeleteInteresting! Good snippet.
ReplyDeleteInteresting snippet. :)
ReplyDeleteAnother intriguing post, especially the last line. Well done.
ReplyDeleteOh, new powers for Seti! I'm glad his headache went away....interesting snippet.
ReplyDeleteI am really intrigued by this chaos and power Seti has. Great snippet.
ReplyDelete"Fighting against my true nature is hurting me." Truer words were never written. Very nice.
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