Sunday, November 16, 2014

WeWriWar 77 Demon and Fairy

Hello Everyone!

Welcome to Week-end Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday. You probably noticed that I'm a bit late for NaNoWriMo, damn that headache I can't seem to get rid of properly (5 days so far). I'll be uploading the next part of the draft soon so you can go have a look if you are interested (Warming: it's start pretty chaotic if you haven't read Blue Angel which draft is also uploaded).

In the previous episodes: Seti let the chaos got out of him as the father of his sister's fiance threaten to break the engagement. Wild, he flies to the beach to see the only person near whom he can get rid of the Chaos without pain, the fairy Kallisto in the Human world below his. He can only observe her through a tidal pool. But this time, she is in danger. Trying to rescue her from a snake, Seti lands in the world below. However, as Kallisto tries to touch him, he flies away back to his hidden place on the beach and listen to Kallisto's conversation with her best friend Kelpie who once again proposes to her and is refused. Kallisto needs to choose between Kelpie or going back to the fairy world to marry prince Kordelius. As the night comes, Kallisto goes home and so does Seti and of course his parents are all weird... (Remember, Seti used his forbidden power and left without an explanation... ) Then Seti was mysteriously pushed in his room, in the dark and apparently turned blind. For the past few weeks, Seti is trying to control the Chaos who wants to take over his body. Now we are having some flash back to explain the relationship between Seti and the Chaos. 

Here are my 8 sentences, we start where we left off last week. We are out of the flashback.
And this time it was the same.
“Fighting against my true nature is hurting me,” Seti thought, “What can this possibly mean?”
This was now his new question. The Chaos was releasing him slowly. The headache was calming down, but he felt exhausted.
“I fight against myself and I’m always, winning in the end,” Seti thought yawning.
He took a few deep breaths before sitting up. He tried to remember where he had put the candles, he knew he had some, he just hoped that they didn’t take them away. He waited until the Chaos completely disappeared deep inside him and then waited a bit more. He put his hand in front of him and called for the fire. Slowly a white flame emerged from his hand.

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  1. I wonder why his parents are the way they are? I like the image of the "white flame". Good 8, Linda! :-)

  2. Oh Seti, I always feel so bad for you.

  3. It sounds of if things are about to get better for him. It's time.

  4. Another intriguing post, especially the last line. Well done.

  5. Oh, new powers for Seti! I'm glad his headache went away....interesting snippet.

  6. I am really intrigued by this chaos and power Seti has. Great snippet.

  7. "Fighting against my true nature is hurting me." Truer words were never written. Very nice.