Sunday, December 7, 2014

WeWriWar 80 Demon and Fairy

Hello everyone and welcome to a new excerpt of Demon and Fairy for the  Week-end Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday

In the previous episodes: Seti let the chaos got out of him as the father of his sister's fiance threaten to break the engagement. Wild, he flies to the beach to see the only person near whom he can get rid of the Chaos without pain, the fairy Kallisto in the Human world below his. He can only observe her through a tidal pool. But this time, she is in danger. Trying to rescue her from a snake, Seti lands in the world below. However, as Kallisto tries to touch him, he flies away back to his hidden place on the beach and listen to Kallisto's conversation with her best friend Kelpie who once again proposes to her and is refused. Kallisto needs to choose between Kelpie or going back to the fairy world to marry prince Kordelius. As the night comes, Kallisto goes home and so does Seti and of course his parents are all weird... (Remember, Seti used his forbidden power and left without an explanation... ) Then Seti was mysteriously pushed in his room, in the dark and apparently turned blind. For the past few weeks, Seti is trying to control the Chaos who wants to take over his body. We had some flash back to explain the relationship between Seti and the Chaos. Now Seti seems to be in control again.

Here are my 8 sentences, we start where we left off last week. Now that the Chaos has calmed down, Seti is looking for the way out.
He held the candle up and looked around. Everything seemed pretty normal, except for the door without a handle and the window. He walked toward the space where the window had been but it was gone. His parents were unable to do that alone, maybe it was an idea of the twin’s father or maybe it was those people who had forbidden them to tell him the truth. He had never seen them, he wasn’t even supposed to know about them, but he had heard a conversation between his father and one of his teachers. His father always called them, “they”. “They” said my son should be able to attend the class if he stays in the back and if nobody comes closer than five meters from him. “They” said that he should go out of the room only for going home. “They” said… “They” always had so much to say about him.

Answer to last week comments.

It's getting weirder, isn't it? Are sure it was Seti's parents locking him up? Or was that just Seti's assumptions? ;) I know I'm evil not letting you know everything, but Seti doesn't know everything either.

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  1. I can't help but wonder where are the parents and whether they had anything to do with all this. Great suspense!

  2. Ah, the infamous "they." I can't wait to find out who they are...

  3. "They..." Yeah, that is an odd thing. He's on to something! Good 8, Linda. :-)

  4. Sorry to comment on this post but just to say thanks for coming to mine and how pleased I am to find another crafter/writer.

    I haven't added my knitted dolls to my blog yet.

    I made a separate blog on Google for my erotica and oh my goodness, the time spend maintaining both.

    Really please to find you and I will be reading your work and taking a look at your crafts soon..xx

  5. The story is unfolding nicely. We find out what is going on as Seti does. Well done.

  6. I've always hated "they's" myself. Great snippet!

  7. Always fascinating, Linda. Next we must know who "They" are.

  8. Wonder who the mysterious "they" is, with so much influence on Seti's Dad. Always more intriguing details - great snippet!

  9. And so it continues. Hope Seti finds some answers.

  10. Hmm, who are "they"? Poor Seti, I think I say that most every week. You are a mean author ;)