Welcome to Week-end Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday. I'm almost done with NaNoWriMo, only about 3500 words left to write. I'll be uploading the next part of the draft soon tonight or tomorrow so you can go have a look if you are interested (Warming: it's start pretty chaotic if you haven't read Blue Angel which draft is also uploaded).
Here are my 8 sentences, we start where we left off last week. Now that the Chaos has calmed down, Seti is looking for the way out.
“I
could have done it ages ago if the Chaos hadn’t been messing around
with my head. I wouldn’t even be locked up if it hadn’t decided
to be a pain just at the wrong moment,” Seti thought and sighed.
He
moved the flame around him carefully. The darkness seemed to be
absorbing his fire. He made it bigger and stood up to go grab the
guitar with his free hand. He shook it a bit.
“Yes,”
he said happily.
He
shook a bit more and a candle went out through the hole.
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Your world is colorful, both by description and as we can see with your vivid accompanying picture. I enjoy tales with a fantastic element to them. Glad I discovered yours!
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I hope Seti gets out. He shouldn't be locked up.
ReplyDeleteAnother great snippet today, Linda.
ReplyDeletenice, is he going to play the guitar?
ReplyDeleteInteresting scene. (Tweeted)
ReplyDeleteGreat Snippet. :)
ReplyDeleteThere's a real note of mysteriousness in this week's snippet. Plus, I love candles...
ReplyDeleteWell, we all know by now that I like Seti, and the fact that he plays the guitar is just another added plus! Great snippet...
ReplyDeleteGreat snippet this week.
ReplyDeleteYour imagination dazzles the mind, Linda. Happy Thanksgiving and let's hear Seti strum away all his Chaos.
ReplyDeleteAwesome 8! Seti pulls at my heartstrings...
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