Sunday, December 14, 2014

WeWriWar 81 Demon and Fairy

Hello everyone and welcome to a new excerpt of Demon and Fairy for the  Week-end Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday

In the previous episodes: Seti let the chaos got out of him as the father of his sister's fiance threaten to break the engagement. Wild, he flies to the beach to see the only person near whom he can get rid of the Chaos without pain, the fairy Kallisto in the Human world below his. He can only observe her through a tidal pool. But this time, she is in danger. Trying to rescue her from a snake, Seti lands in the world below. However, as Kallisto tries to touch him, he flies away back to his hidden place on the beach and listen to Kallisto's conversation with her best friend Kelpie who once again proposes to her and is refused. Kallisto needs to choose between Kelpie or going back to the fairy world to marry prince Kordelius. As the night comes, Kallisto goes home and so does Seti and of course his parents are all weird... (Remember, Seti used his forbidden power and left without an explanation... ) Then Seti was mysteriously pushed in his room, in the dark and apparently turned blind. For the past few weeks, Seti is trying to control the Chaos who wants to take over his body. We had some flash back to explain the relationship between Seti and the Chaos. Now Seti seems to be in control again.

Here are my 8 sentences, we start where we left off last week. Now that the Chaos has calmed down, Seti is looking for the way out.

And today “They” probably said that he couldn’t control the Chaos and that he should be locked up in his room in the dark. As if “they” knew something. He knew the truth. He knew that he shouldn’t have been born in the first place but he was here because his parent transgressed the rules, and “They” decided that his parents were good enough to keep and educate him. At the same time he had been practicing with the Chaos’ powers in secret and it was the reason why he had allowed it to go out today because he knew that he wouldn’t hurt anyone. The twin’s father also really needed a lesson. It was simple as long as he was using the Chaos, it was safe, if nobody interfered; it was alright. But if the Chaos was using him, he couldn’t guaranty anyone’s security. He didn’t want to touch people just in case, but maybe if he had he would have proven it was safe. 

“How am I going to get out of here?”

Answer to last week comments.

You will know who they are in time but even once you know you still have a lot of unsuspected mystery to go on with.

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  1. I love that he is concerned about hurting someone and trying to prevent causing harm.

  2. I want to know how he's going to get out of there. Intriguing snippet!

  3. Poor Seti is so challenged in so many ways, by the Chaos and everything else, but I love that he keeps trying new things. Excellent esnippet.

  4. I love the differentiation between him using the chaos instead of the chaos using him. Interesting. I wonder how he'll get out too!

  5. Poor Seti has a hard time, doesn't he?

  6. I hate that he is feeling as if he should have never been born. Great snippet. :)

  7. poor Seti, he feels more and more like a prisoner of his own mind...

  8. I want to know how he gets out of this.