Hello everybody and welcome for a new Sunday of writing with Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday!
I
decided to change things a little bit so for the next few months, I'm
going to present you my new WIP. It's called "The House at the Crossing"
and it's a prequel to Demon Soul and the demon series. It's a bit of a mix of Fantasy and Science-fiction.
It
follows one of the books more obscure character as she first come into
the House. It's suppose to explain why there are so many people is the
house and sort of where they come from and at the same time be a first
time adventure for the main character as she needs to adapt to her new
role and the new version of who she is.
Since it's a WIP, and I still haven't finished the first draft, it's still really row. Hopefully, we'll see some improvement as it goes.
We
leave our suitcases and follow her to the kitchen. It's on the
right side of the house. It's so small, I feel a bit claustrophobic
being here. The other two don't seem to mind as much.
Aunt
Teresa mentions me to sit at the end of the table and she put a cold
bony hand on my left arm. It's strange that I can feel her cold hand even
through my sweater. I wonder if the heating is working properly in
this house. It's only the beginning of autumn though, I know how
people in my mother's family are about the heating.
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Great description of that cold hand. I can just about feel it. Also, that's a stunning cover.
ReplyDeleteUh oh, the cold bony hand seems quite ominous! I'm enjoying this story and today was another terrific snippet, keeping me guessing.
ReplyDeleteThat cold hand would give me pause! Nice and atmospheric.
ReplyDeleteVery ominous! I enjoyed the spooky foreshadowing.
ReplyDeleteGreat atmospheric snippet, I'm enjoying these and agree with everyone else about the foreshadowing, that cold, bony hand is enough to give anyone the shivers!:)
ReplyDeleteI'm not sure which was creepier, the house or he aunt. I think I'll vote for the aunt.
ReplyDeleteReally creepy snippet. You're doing a great job on atmosphere.
ReplyDeleteP.S. Forgot to register on the WeWriWar site this week. Mine's up at the usual https://hywelalyn.blogspot.com
ReplyDeleteI think that cold and bony hand isn't a good sign at all. How does she feel it through her sweater? Creepy is right! Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteOk, interesting re the cold hand. I wonder about the importance of it.
ReplyDeleteThat must be some cold hand to feel through a sweater. Brrr. Creepy.
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