Sunday, March 4, 2018

WeWriWar 242: Demon Soul

Welcome to a new excerpt of DEMON SOUL for the Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.

Brownie is a normal girl, or so she thinks. She likes to chat with her sisters about random things, she likes fashion and she is member of the fashion club at school. But one day, as her little brother gets really sick because of a curse placed on him, she meets this really strange guy who cures him absorbing the baby's sickness within himself. As he is about to fall from his new acquired fever, Brownie sees Yue's soul and immediately falls in love with him. But Yue is not a human, Yue is a demon.
Brownie and Yue will built their love story until....

Until Yue's soul is stolen. There is nothing left of their love. The purple light dancing in Yue's grey eyes is gone. Forever? Not quite. Brownie is desperate to find it back. And to get a soul stolen by demons, she needs to go deep into dark magic! But Brownie is not a witch, she is just looking for a spell powerful enough to bring her love back. When an amateur starts playing with strong magic without preparation and without caring for the consequences, things turn wrong...

Let's start right where we left off

She took Yobi out of Gideon's arms and cuddled him. "It's ok, I'm here now." 
She turned to Gideon.
"Won't you ever stop torturing him?" She started walking away. "It's ok, sweetie. Don't cry."
"Hey, wait a minute," Gideon said stopping her by her arm. "I need the spell to fix the play-ground."

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  1. You've really piqued my curiosity. Interesting dynamics here.

  2. Interesting! I wonder what he’s going to do next?

  3. My curiosity is up. Can't wait to find out more.

  4. He's got a lot of nerve asking her for anything! I can't wait to find out her reaction.

  5. Will she give him the spell? And if so, why?

  6. SO, if he is a demon--is he bad? Are all demons bad in this universe? I am intrigued.

  7. Spell the fix the playground? Intrigued to find out how and why. Interesting snippet.