Welcome to a new excerpt of DEMON SOUL for the Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.
Pre-Plot:
Brownie is a normal girl, or so she thinks. She likes to chat with her
sisters about random things, she likes fashion and she is member of the
fashion club at school. But one day, as her little brother gets really
sick because of a curse placed on him, she meets this really strange guy
who cures him absorbing the baby's sickness within himself. As he is
about to fall from his new acquired fever, Brownie sees Yue's soul and
immediately falls in love with him. But Yue is not a human, Yue is a
demon.
Brownie and Yue will built their love story until....
Plot:
Until Yue's soul is stolen. There is nothing left of their love. The
purple light dancing in Yue's grey eyes is gone. Forever? Not quite.
Brownie is desperate to find it back. And to get a soul stolen by
demons, she needs to go deep into dark magic! But Brownie is not a
witch, she is just looking for a spell powerful enough to bring her love
back. When an amateur starts playing with strong magic without
preparation and without caring for the consequences, things turn
wrong...
After a glance at Brownie
and Ayokunle, he started to become invisible.
"I won't give it
back. I like it too. It's mine now."
His ears and tails were
the only parts of his body that remained visible as he ran to the
stairs.
"Got you!”
Appearing from nowhere
Gideon grabbed Yobi's invisible body.
"Let me go! Let me
go!" Yobi struggled with ferocity in Gideon's arms but Gideon
was much stronger.
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Oh dear, looks like that Yobi's going to be a problem - hope Gideon can keep him under control!
ReplyDeleteSo what is it that Yobi has? A stolen soul?
ReplyDeleteI can picture this scene well. :)
ReplyDeleteVery dynamic scene! This sounds like an interesting story.
ReplyDeleteHaha! He has to learn to cloak all of his body or he will get caught. :-)
ReplyDeleteNicely done! Chilling and compelling.
ReplyDeleteYobi is a rascal. Lol
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