Welcome to a new excerpt of Demon and Fairy for the Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.
In the previous episodes: Seti let the chaos got out of him as
the father of his sister's fiance threaten to break the engagement.
Wild, he flies to the beach to see the only person near whom he can get
rid of the Chaos without pain, the fairy Kallisto in the Human world
below his. He can only observe her through a tidal pool. But this time,
she is in danger. Trying to rescue her from a snake, Seti lands in the
world below. However, as Kallisto tries to touch him, he flies away back
to his hidden place on the beach and listen to Kallisto's conversation
with her best friend Kelpie who once again proposes to “It is the first
time the Chaos manifested,” Seti’s father answered clenching his fists.
“Then it is bad luck, he shouldn’t have been born in the first place,
and he shouldn’t have stayed alive once born. Now, you can start blaming
yourself for everything that is going to happen if he lets you live
long enough to see it. We can’t be sure.” The man said without even
looking back. He followed his companion through the corridor to the
kitchen door. her and is
refused. Kallisto needs to choose between Kelpie or going back to the
fairy world to marry prince Kordelius. As the night comes, Kallisto goes
home and so does Seti and of course his parents are all weird...
(Remember, Seti used his forbidden power and left without an
explanation... ) Then Seti was mysteriously pushed in his room, in the
dark and apparently turned blind. For the past few weeks, Seti is trying
to control the Chaos who wants to take over his body. We had some flash
back to explain the relationship between Seti and the Chaos. Seti managed to open a hole in the wall while keeping the Chaos away, but how long can he stay in control?
Here are my 8 sentences, we start where we left off last week. Seti had stopped to wait and see what the others would do.
Here are my 8 sentences, we start where we left off last week. Seti had stopped to wait and see what the others would do.
“I cannot leave you here, you need help, what am I supposed to do if I can’t touch you,” Kallisto whispered.
A little blue fairy flight to her ear and whispered something with a crystalline noise.
“I know he is a demon, I know it’s dangerous, but he is different…”
Another fairy pulled on her dress to take her away from Seti.
“I know Isa won’t be happy but it doesn’t matter,” Kallisto said bending over Seti. “He seemed to be really hurt. I can’t leave him this way. He saved us from the snake four days ago you remember”
Answers to last week's comments
Yes, no touching, you know what happens when Seti touches things and the Chaos comes out right.... Imagine that on people.
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I do hope they can help Seti. He deserves a good friend.
ReplyDeleteKallisto seems to be drawn to helping Seti - wonder if this is something she will come to regret?
ReplyDeleteI hope she will help him. nice snippet.
ReplyDeleteQuite a conundrum! I'm sure she'll figure something out.
ReplyDeleteThe fairies made me smile
ReplyDeleteOh no! Great snippet really feel the emotions.
ReplyDeleteOn the other hand, what if her touch is healing? What if all he needs is for someone to touch him in love and caring?
ReplyDeleteNice work. The reader can feel the conflicts brewing in the scene.
ReplyDeleteMaybe she can take the chaos away.
ReplyDeletePoor Seti! Love the emotion in this snippet. Such an intriguing storyline you have here. :)
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