Sunday, April 12, 2015

WeWriWar 98 Demon and Fairy

Welcome to a new excerpt of Demon and Fairy for the Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.

In the previous episodes: Seti let the chaos got out of him as the father of his sister's fiance threaten to break the engagement. Wild, he flies to the beach to see the only person near whom he can get rid of the Chaos without pain, the fairy Kallisto in the Human world below his. He can only observe her through a tidal pool. But this time, she is in danger. Trying to rescue her from a snake, Seti lands in the world below. However, as Kallisto tries to touch him, he flies away back to his hidden place on the beach and listen to Kallisto's conversation with her best friend Kelpie who once again proposes to “It is the first time the Chaos manifested,” Seti’s father answered clenching his fists. “Then it is bad luck, he shouldn’t have been born in the first place, and he shouldn’t have stayed alive once born. Now, you can start blaming yourself for everything that is going to happen if he lets you live long enough to see it. We can’t be sure.” The man said without even looking back. He followed his companion through the corridor to the kitchen door. her and is refused. Kallisto needs to choose between Kelpie or going back to the fairy world to marry prince Kordelius. As the night comes, Kallisto goes home and so does Seti and of course his parents are all weird... (Remember, Seti used his forbidden power and left without an explanation... ) Then Seti was mysteriously pushed in his room, in the dark and apparently turned blind. For the past few weeks, Seti is trying to control the Chaos who wants to take over his body. We had some flash back to explain the relationship between Seti and the Chaos. Seti managed to open a hole in the wall while keeping the Chaos away, but how long can he stay in control? 

Here are my 8 sentences, we start where we left off last week. Seti had stopped to wait and see what the others would do.

“I cannot leave you here, you need help, what am I supposed to do if I can’t touch you,” Kallisto whispered.
A little blue fairy flight to her ear and whispered something with a crystalline noise.
“I know he is a demon, I know it’s dangerous, but he is different…”
Another fairy pulled on her dress to take her away from Seti.
“I know Isa won’t be happy but it doesn’t matter,” Kallisto said bending over Seti. “He seemed to be really hurt. I can’t leave him this way. He saved us from the snake four days ago you remember”

Answers to last week's comments


Yes, no touching, you know what happens when Seti touches things and the Chaos comes out right.... Imagine that on people.


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10 comments:

  1. I do hope they can help Seti. He deserves a good friend.

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  2. Kallisto seems to be drawn to helping Seti - wonder if this is something she will come to regret?

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  3. I hope she will help him. nice snippet.

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  4. Quite a conundrum! I'm sure she'll figure something out.

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  5. Oh no! Great snippet really feel the emotions.

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  6. On the other hand, what if her touch is healing? What if all he needs is for someone to touch him in love and caring?

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  7. Nice work. The reader can feel the conflicts brewing in the scene.

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  8. Maybe she can take the chaos away.

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  9. Poor Seti! Love the emotion in this snippet. Such an intriguing storyline you have here. :)

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