Sunday, February 11, 2018

WeWriWar 239: Demon Soul

Welcome to a new excerpt of DEMON SOUL for the Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.

Brownie is a normal girl, or so she thinks. She likes to chat with her sisters about random things, she likes fashion and she is member of the fashion club at school. But one day, as her little brother gets really sick because of a curse placed on him, she meets this really strange guy who cures him absorbing the baby's sickness within himself. As he is about to fall from his new acquired fever, Brownie sees Yue's soul and immediately falls in love with him. But Yue is not a human, Yue is a demon.
Brownie and Yue will built their love story until....

Until Yue's soul is stolen. There is nothing left of their love. The purple light dancing in Yue's grey eyes is gone. Forever? Not quite. Brownie is desperate to find it back. And to get a soul stolen by demons, she needs to go deep into dark magic! But Brownie is not a witch, she is just looking for a spell powerful enough to bring her love back. When an amateur starts playing with strong magic without preparation and without caring for the consequences, things turn wrong...

Let's start right where we left off

After a glance at Brownie and Ayokunle, he started to become invisible.
"I won't give it back. I like it too. It's mine now."
His ears and tails were the only parts of his body that remained visible as he ran to the stairs.
"Got you!”
Appearing from nowhere Gideon grabbed Yobi's invisible body.
"Let me go! Let me go!" Yobi struggled with ferocity in Gideon's arms but Gideon was much stronger.

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  1. Oh dear, looks like that Yobi's going to be a problem - hope Gideon can keep him under control!

  2. So what is it that Yobi has? A stolen soul?

  3. Very dynamic scene! This sounds like an interesting story.

  4. Haha! He has to learn to cloak all of his body or he will get caught. :-)

  5. Nicely done! Chilling and compelling.