Welcome to a new excerpt of DEMON SOUL for the Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.
Pre-Plot:
Brownie is a normal girl, or so she thinks. She likes to chat with her
sisters about random things, she likes fashion and she is member of the
fashion club at school. But one day, as her little brother gets really
sick because of a curse placed on him, she meets this really strange guy
who cures him absorbing the baby's sickness within himself. As he is
about to fall from his new acquired fever, Brownie sees Yue's soul and
immediately falls in love with him. But Yue is not a human, Yue is a
demon.
Brownie and Yue will built their love story until....
Plot:
Until Yue's soul is stolen. There is nothing left of their love. The
purple light dancing in Yue's grey eyes is gone. Forever? Not quite.
Brownie is desperate to find it back. And to get a soul stolen by
demons, she needs to go deep into dark magic! But Brownie is not a
witch, she is just looking for a spell powerful enough to bring her love
back. When an amateur starts playing with strong magic without
preparation and without caring for the consequences, things turn
wrong...
"First you have to
help me with the mess you made at the playground; you know it takes
me longer to fix when I don't know the spell you used.”
Yobi reappeared and
laughed.
"It's not funny if I
tell you, I won't tell you anything."
"Well Gideon,"
Brownie said "I think we will have to call Tân to help us."
Yobi stopped laughing and
reappeared completely. He took one of his tails that still showed
burned traces lovingly in his hands.
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Shows some great characterization.Great job Linda!
ReplyDeleteYobi is a character!
ReplyDeleteSuch an imagination you have, Linda! Delightful!
ReplyDeleteIt seems you just need to find the right bogeyman to threaten him with.
ReplyDeleteI take it Gideon isn't fond of Tan. LOL
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