Welcome to a new Wednesday Hump Day Hook!
If you want more of it, click here, amazing writers are waiting for you to read their hooks!
But first, here is a little part of Demon World unedited, as I'm now
writing book 5 of the series for NaNoWriMo with daily draft upload I
thought it might be a good idea to show you tibits
of the entire series. It's time for you to meet the three demons from the North.
Enjoy!
Lonan
jumped on the bed.
“Why
don’t we have hammock?” he asked.
“That’s
the question I was going to ask,” Torsti answered, “It’s as if
that place had been built by humans.”
“It
had been built by humans,” Odeon answered.
“How
do you know that?” Loki asked. He was always amazed by Odeon’s
knowledge, Odeon knew everything.
“About
some sixty years ago, there was a terrible war in the Human World,
the Human World back then resembled a bit the Demon World now. People
were not safe, they were running everywhere in the night, hiding
things from each others, hiding from their neighbor, hiding from
their government, hiding from the police. One of them stood up
and decided to classify people, to tell everyone where the threat
was coming from, he wanted people to hate each other and their fear
was serving his own purpose and he became powerful, very powerful in
the Human World a lot of people were following him, either because
they were too afraid to resist or because they were agreeing with
him. That’s what had lead people to have secrets, people wanted to
escape from him, but his territory was always increasing, so one of us
had an idea. He decided to help him, he created a wonderful plan to
be able to kill as many humans as possible, he opened a route from
one of the Human World’s forest to this forest and kept it
invisible from that man and his followers. Then a lot of desperate
humans arrived in this inhabited part of the Demon World and created
their home in caves like this, this is not the only one around, just
they are pretty difficult to find.”
“Then
what happened to the humans? Why are they not here anymore?” Lonan
asked.
“Because
humans are really, really fun to play with but are really, really easy
to break”, Torsti answered.
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Oh, my goodness. Is this prophecy? Intense, for sure! Great hook.
ReplyDeleteWOW. Loved that x
ReplyDeleteWOW Loved that!
ReplyDeleteIt's a really deep piece of writing and would be great to know what happens next. Loved it!
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