Sunday, October 12, 2014

WeWriWar 72 Demon and Fairy



Hello everyone!

Welcome to Week-end Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday. Yesterday, I participated in 24 hours comics day and that was absolutely awesome and I obtained a side story of my Demon series in comic form. I still need to make the images all pretty looking for computer, but you can have a look here. (At least the cover is ready)

In the previous episodes: Seti let the chaos got out of him as the father of his sister's fiance threaten to break the engagement. Wild, he flies to the beach to see the only person near whom he can get rid of the Chaos without pain, the fairy Kallisto in the Human world below his. He can only observe her through a tidal pool. But this time, she is in danger. Trying to rescue her from a snake, Seti lands in the world below. However, as Kallisto tries to touch him, he flies away back to his hidden place on the beach and listen to Kallisto's conversation with her best friend Kelpie who once again proposes to her and is refused. Kallisto needs to choose between Kelpie or going back to the fairy world to marry prince Kordelius. As the night comes, Kallisto goes home and so does Seti and of course his parents are all weird... (Remember, Seti used his forbidden power and left without an explanation... ) Then Seti was mysteriously pushed in his room, in the dark and apparently turned blind. For the past few weeks, Seti is trying to control the Chaos who wants to take over his body. Now we are having some flash back to explain the relationship between Seti and the Chaos. 

Here are my 8 sentences, we start where we left off last week with the boy's mum telling him not to touch the ball.


But we are playing,” the boy answered.
His mum grabbed his hand and pulled him away from Seti who didn’t know what to do. He looked up as his father arrived.
I’m sorry, it won’t happen again,” his father said.
How can you even let him out in the park where so many children are playing? You should be more responsible,” the boy’s mum answered walking away.
It won’t happen again,” his father said.
Then the Chaos had manifested.
 

Answer to last week's comments: 
Elena, she is talking to her son, of course, you know the same way adult tend to talk about children as if they are not here. 
Gem, not really, Seti has a lot of places to go, just he doesn't know it yet. 
Chip, I wonder that too, maybe burning kittens... ;)
Thanks everyone, it's a bit hard at time to get the "when I was a kid" part right.
 
 
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9 comments:

  1. What is gonna happen now? You have me wondering, and waiting for next week!

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  2. Oh wow and then you leave us on the cliffhanger of Chaos manifesting itself! Poor Seti....but an intriguing excerpt.

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  3. Can't wait to see what unfolds next. Great snippet.

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  4. I love that last line... I suspect things are about to get very interesting indeed.

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  5. Linda, you write a baffling, marvelous tale. It's confusing in some way but understandable in other.
    Happy Chaos to you and success with your story.

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  6. I hope Seti finds those places to go soon. He seems very loyal and sweet.

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  7. Not sure if my last post went through. But I'll amend it here. Seti seems very trusting, not sweet.

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  8. Sheesh! Seti gets hit in the head with a ball and he's the one in trouble? That's not fair!

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