Sunday, March 26, 2017

WeWriWar 200: Rainbow catcher

Welcome to a new excerpt of Rainbow Catcher for the Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday. Today I celebrate 200 participations! That sounds like a lot!

Now let's go back to our story.

Summary of previous episodes: Clarissa is coughing and wanted to watch Everett Cooper on TV but Jason refused, she is due to get her rainbow the next day but she seems scared, to make her feel better Jason leave the TV on. Clarissa tried to explain about rainbows, she is a big fan of Everett Cooper but Jason is not too sure about it. Clarissa complained about her dialophone but Jason needs to go to work. Before completely leaving he is thinking about getting her her rainbow. We flashed back to the meeting Jason had with a rainbow seller at the black market. Jason left Clarissa's room to go to work. Jason was talking to his boss about the rainbow coming the next day. Jason prepared the money for the rainbow in a sport bag and went to the hospital. The rainbow seller arrived for the delivery. But it was a scam and Jason prepares to go get the rainbow himself in the desert. Markus has a last surprise for him.

We start just where we left off last week.

He took a deep breath, he could let go of the handle and actually let go of everything. His feet and lower legs were imprisoned by metallic shoes, which had come from nowhere to secure him. Another metallic part had grown between him and the handle protecting his back. He felt both sleepy and powerful. The speed and the wind tickled his eyes. The previously noisy motorbike was now totally quiet. The sensation was extreme. He felt like a part of the universe around him as if the knowledge of all things was closer than expected.

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  1. Whoa, super cool transformation. He still better be careful though.

  2. wow .... nice description ... what a nifty bike. it's getting better and better.

  3. That has to be an awesome feeling. Great scene. :)

  4. Great description of his feelings. Makes me want to be riding that bike!