Wednesday, November 19, 2014

Hump Day Hook 37

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Welcome to a new Wednesday Hump Day Hook!
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But first, here is a little part of Demon World unedited, as I'm now writing book 5 of the series for NaNoWriMo with daily draft upload I thought it might be a good idea to show you tibits of the entire series. It's time for you to meet the three demons from the North.
Lonan jumped on the bed.
Why don’t we have hammock?” he asked.
That’s the question I was going to ask,” Torsti answered, “It’s as if that place had been built by humans.”
It had been built by humans,” Odeon answered.
How do you know that?” Loki asked. He was always amazed by Odeon’s knowledge, Odeon knew everything.
About some sixty years ago, there was a terrible war in the Human World, the Human World back then resembled a bit the Demon World now. People were not safe, they were running everywhere in the night, hiding things from each others, hiding from their neighbor, hiding from their government, hiding from the police. One of them stood up and decided to classify people, to tell everyone where the threat was coming from, he wanted people to hate each other and their fear was serving his own purpose and he became powerful, very powerful in the Human World a lot of people were following him, either because they were too afraid to resist or because they were agreeing with him. That’s what had lead people to have secrets, people wanted to escape from him, but his territory was always increasing, so one of us had an idea. He decided to help him, he created a wonderful plan to be able to kill as many humans as possible, he opened a route from one of the Human World’s forest to this forest and kept it invisible from that man and his followers. Then a lot of desperate humans arrived in this inhabited part of the Demon World and created their home in caves like this, this is not the only one around, just they are pretty difficult to find.”
Then what happened to the humans? Why are they not here anymore?” Lonan asked.
Because humans are really, really fun to play with but are really, really easy to break”, Torsti answered.

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  1. Oh, my goodness. Is this prophecy? Intense, for sure! Great hook.

  2. It's a really deep piece of writing and would be great to know what happens next. Loved it!