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Wednesday, December 1, 2021

Wednesday Snippet 330: Blue Angel

Welcome to a new part of Blue Angel unedited, we start right where we left off last time.  


 We are following Odeon and Torsti.

He tried to look past Odeon to see if there was really something in this direction but there was still no light what-so-ever. He wondered if it wasn't Odeon's imagination. He could only hear the water drop, somewhere close from the stalactite above him, he had to protect his head to make sure he wasn't hitting them. Odeon seemed just find, walking on the side when one was coming close. Torsti couldn't repress a laugh.

“What's so funny?” Odeon asked.

“I was just thinking, you're a bit like a bat,” Torsti said. “I think I should start call you Bateon.”

“And what should I call you then?” Odeon said shaking his head.

“No idea, but seriously, how do you know where we are going? How do you know that we are not going to fall in a hole at the next step?” Torsti asked.

“Oh, I didn't think about holes on the ground,” Odeon said. “I'll be careful now.”

It was Torsti's turn to shake his head. But it didn't really matter where they were going just now as long as it was taking them out. Torsti let a little bit more distance between him and his brother and made sure to secure every step. He closed his eyes just like Odeon had said but opened them again straight away. He couldn't let go of his eye sight even if there was only darkness around, it made him feel dizzy and weak. As if anything could arrive and attack him. He wondered how Odeon could stay so calm. The darkness was oppressing him. Odeon suddenly stopped without warming and Torsti bumped into him. He was about to ask what was the problem but refrained. There was a new sound, something like a humming it seemed that someone was singing.

Odeon turned around to look at his brother but he couldn't see his face, all he could was to feel his presence and his fist clenching a bit more at his shirt. He took a deep breath and closed his eyes once more to listen. It was difficult to hear where the sound was coming from in this cave, the echo made it like it was coming from everywhere all at once. He concentrated on the sound, trying to figure out in which direction it was stronger. He took a few steps to the left, then walked back to the right. He counted his step, making sure that he knew where he was. They had been walking for so long that he was afraid of getting lost. The place was really a maze and a dark one. He finally decided to continue in the direction he had chosen from the beginning, the light felt more and more intense even if he still couldn't see it.


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