Hello everybody and welcome for a new Sunday of writing with Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday!
I
decided to change things a little bit so for the next few months, I'm
going to present you my new WIP. It's called "The House at the Crossing"
and it's a prequel to Demon Soul and the demon series. It's a bit of a mix of Fantasy and Science-fiction.
It
follows one of the books more obscure character as she first come into
the House. It's suppose to explain why there are so many people is the
house and sort of where they come from and at the same time be a first
time adventure for the main character as she needs to adapt to her new
role and the new version of who she is.
Since it's a WIP, and I still haven't finished the first draft, it's still really row. Hopefully, we'll see some improvement as it goes.
The
smell of lavender is coming from it. The sharp handwriting, it's like I
have seen it a hundred, a thousand time before.
The
boiler whistles and a fourth version of me stand in the corner next to
Aunt Teresa to take care of it. Aunt Teresa catches my eyes.
“Why
don't you pick up your favorite tea in that drawer?” she says.
I'm
not sure what to do but somehow there are six cups already on the
table and there is another version of me waiting at the entrance of
the kitchen.
“It's
getting better and better,” Aunt Teresa said.
I
don't think anything can get more terrifying but I stand up and pass
a hand in my short hair and walk to the drawer.
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I don't know about 'better and better' I think it's getting worse, or certainly more confusing and frightening for her. You've really set up the atmosphere here - the only niggle I have is her brushing her hand through her 'short' hair - I don't think she'd consciously be thinking of it as short, especially under these circumstances. Otherwise a great snippet!
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