Welcome to a new excerpt of DEMON SOUL for the Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.
Pre-Plot:
Brownie is a normal girl, or so she thinks. She likes to chat with her
sisters about random things, she likes fashion and she is member of the
fashion club at school. But one day, as her little brother gets really
sick because of a curse placed on him, she meets this really strange guy
who cures him absorbing the baby's sickness within himself. As he is
about to fall from his new acquired fever, Brownie sees Yue's soul and
immediately falls in love with him. But Yue is not a human, Yue is a
demon.
Brownie and Yue will built their love story until....
Plot:
Until Yue's soul is stolen. There is nothing left of their love. The
purple light dancing in Yue's grey eyes is gone. Forever? Not quite.
Brownie is desperate to find it back. And to get a soul stolen by
demons, she needs to go deep into dark magic! But Brownie is not a
witch, she is just looking for a spell powerful enough to bring her love
back. When an amateur starts playing with strong magic without
preparation and without caring for the consequences, things turn
wrong...
Only when absolutely
necessary, she thought again. Well, this time it was
absolutely necessary, even if going there alone wasn’t a rejoicing
task.
She put down her pencil
and looked at the list. Tomorrow, she would go to the dark street
first, then do the rest of the shopping. It was way better to be
caught there with nothing in case she was caught. She took the
books back to their shelves. Over the last few weeks she had learned
so much about demons, but it was the first time she was almost happy
about it. At first she felt like she invaded Yue’s world without
his consent.
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Great job building up the suspense, and the foreboding. Hope she's not letting herself in for trouble, though.
ReplyDeleteI'm really enjoying your heroine and her determined approach to saving the hero! Another great snippet...
ReplyDeleteIt sounds like she's contemplating something dangerous.
ReplyDeleteI love the change in her mood.
ReplyDeleteShe does want to save the hero. :)
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