Sunday, March 25, 2018

WeWriWar 245: Demon Soul

Welcome to a new excerpt of DEMON SOUL for the Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.

Brownie is a normal girl, or so she thinks. She likes to chat with her sisters about random things, she likes fashion and she is member of the fashion club at school. But one day, as her little brother gets really sick because of a curse placed on him, she meets this really strange guy who cures him absorbing the baby's sickness within himself. As he is about to fall from his new acquired fever, Brownie sees Yue's soul and immediately falls in love with him. But Yue is not a human, Yue is a demon.
Brownie and Yue will built their love story until....

Until Yue's soul is stolen. There is nothing left of their love. The purple light dancing in Yue's grey eyes is gone. Forever? Not quite. Brownie is desperate to find it back. And to get a soul stolen by demons, she needs to go deep into dark magic! But Brownie is not a witch, she is just looking for a spell powerful enough to bring her love back. When an amateur starts playing with strong magic without preparation and without caring for the consequences, things turn wrong...

Let's start right where we left off

"It's under my bed," Yobi said.
"Let's go Ayo."
Brownie climbed the stairs carrying Ayokunle in her arms.
"And it’s full of spiders there," Yobi said quickly laughing.
Ayokunle cried again.
"I don't want spiders on my teddy."
Yobi laughed louder.
"It's gonna be ok, Ayo. I'll take care of the spiders," Brownie said throwing a dark look at Yobi who pulled out his tongue at them.

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  1. So glad Brownie isn’t worried about the spiders- I would be!

  2. So it's a teddy bear under the bed. Having read your blurb just prior to the snippet, I thought for a moment that it was the soul. ;-)

    BTW, my link didn't make it to the list (though Teresa is retroactively adding it). My post is as usual.

  3. Not spiders!!! :-) I'm glad there is someone there willing to deal with them. :-)

  4. Spiders? Yuck! Glad Brownie is taking care of them. Good snippet.