Sunday, December 31, 2017

WeWriWar 234: Demon Soul

Welcome to a new excerpt of DEMON SOUL for the Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.

Brownie is a normal girl, or so she thinks. She likes to chat with her sisters about random things, she likes fashion and she is member of the fashion club at school. But one day, as her little brother gets really sick because of a curse placed on him, she meets this really strange guy who cures him absorbing the baby's sickness within himself. As he is about to fall from his new acquired fever, Brownie sees Yue's soul and immediately falls in love with him. But Yue is not a human, Yue is a demon.
Brownie and Yue will built their love story until....

Until Yue's soul is stolen. There is nothing left of their love. The purple light dancing in Yue's grey eyes is gone. Forever? Not quite. Brownie is desperate to find it back. And to get a soul stolen by demons, she needs to go deep into dark magic! But Brownie is not a witch, she is just looking for a spell powerful enough to bring her love back. When an amateur starts playing with strong magic without preparation and without caring for the consequences, things turn wrong...

Let's start right where we left off

Ayokunle was a very special boy. He was one of the last descendants of a dragon clan. Everything he wished for would be granted but in return he would have to go through a lot of pain.
A few months ago, as he watched the first flight of the baby birds from the nest near the living room window, he had wished he could fly. Immediately, wings grew on his back, giving him incredible pain.

That's how Brownie had met Yue the first time.
She had finally finished calming Ayokunle's pain by giving him sugar and he was about to fall asleep when Yue appeared out of nowhere.
"I heard the little boy was in pain," he said, confident. "I can cure him."

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  1. Very strange (yet intriguing) setting, context, world. Will have to keep reading snippets to get a sense of the story, but so far so good. Happy New Year!

  2. An interesting premise. Can't wait for the next developments! Happy New Year!

  3. This kid really needs to be careful what he wishes for.