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Let's continue Seti's adventure.
In the previous episodes: Seti let the chaos got out of him as
the father of his sister's fiance threaten to break the engagement.
Wild, he flies to the beach to see the only person near whom he can get
rid of the Chaos without pain, the fairy Kallisto in the Human world
below his. He can only observe her through a tidal pool. But this time,
she is in danger. Trying to rescue her from a snake, Seti lands in the
world below. However, as Kallisto tries to touch him, he flies away back
to his hidden place on the beach and listen to Kallisto's conversation
with her best friend Kelpie who once again proposes to “It is the first
time the Chaos manifested,” Seti’s father answered clenching his fists.
“Then it is bad luck, he shouldn’t have been born in the first place,
and he shouldn’t have stayed alive once born. Now, you can start blaming
yourself for everything that is going to happen if he lets you live
long enough to see it. We can’t be sure.” The man said without even
looking back. He followed his companion through the corridor to the
kitchen door. her and is
refused. Kallisto needs to choose between Kelpie or going back to the
fairy world to marry prince Kordelius. As the night comes, Kallisto goes
home and so does Seti and of course his parents are all weird...
(Remember, Seti used his forbidden power and left without an
explanation... ) Then Seti was mysteriously pushed in his room, in the
dark and apparently turned blind. For the past few weeks, Seti is trying
to control the Chaos who wants to take over his body. We had some flash
back to explain the relationship between Seti and the Chaos. Seti managed to open a hole in the wall while keeping the Chaos away, but how long can he stay in control?
Here are my 8 sentences, we start where we left off last week. Seti had stopped to wait and see what the others would do.
Here are my 8 sentences, we start where we left off last week. Seti had stopped to wait and see what the others would do.
“They are not coming, those monsters they are scared and hiding, I am too powerful,” the Chaos yelled with pride.
Answers to last week's comments
The chaos always seems like it's going to get it total control any minute, right? I guess it will be a never ending battle to the end!
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The conflict is very well written. Another great snippet!
ReplyDeleteNeedles in the brain. Shiver.
ReplyDeleteI love the way he's fighting with the Chaos (and in a way, fighting with himself).
ReplyDeleteI love the way he's fighting with the Chaos (and in a way, fighting with himself).
ReplyDeleteIt sounds like the Chaos is fully in control, especially with Seti feeling weaker. What a battle he's been through.
ReplyDeleteIt's a great idea to post answers to comments in this week's snippet. I may have to try that. :)
ReplyDeleteI'm curious about this world you are setting up!
I'm with Elaine. Needles in the brain? I'm outa there but not dear Seti. What a world you've created, Linda.
ReplyDeleteOy! What a snippet, Linda. I'm worried for Seti. Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteLove how you portray the constant fighting he battles with chaos back and forth.
ReplyDeletePoor Seti-- such conflicted emotions raging through him. It's no wonder is head is hurting. Well done!
ReplyDelete“They are not coming, those monsters they are scared and hiding, I am too powerful,” the Chaos yelled with pride.--- I laughed at how excited and confident Chaos is. :)
ReplyDeletePoor Seti never catches a break from battling with Chaos, does he? I liked his internal dialogue....
ReplyDeleteOh yikes! I'm afraid of what will happen if Chaos gains control of him. Such an interesting storyline. :)
ReplyDeleteHmmm. Pride comes before a fall, as they say. It's very interesting how things are unfolding with the Chaos as a part of him.
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