Sunday, March 8, 2015

WeWriWar 93 Demon and Fairy

Welcome to a new excerpt of Demon and Fairy for the Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.

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In the previous episodes: Seti let the chaos got out of him as the father of his sister's fiance threaten to break the engagement. Wild, he flies to the beach to see the only person near whom he can get rid of the Chaos without pain, the fairy Kallisto in the Human world below his. He can only observe her through a tidal pool. But this time, she is in danger. Trying to rescue her from a snake, Seti lands in the world below. However, as Kallisto tries to touch him, he flies away back to his hidden place on the beach and listen to Kallisto's conversation with her best friend Kelpie who once again proposes to “It is the first time the Chaos manifested,” Seti’s father answered clenching his fists. “Then it is bad luck, he shouldn’t have been born in the first place, and he shouldn’t have stayed alive once born. Now, you can start blaming yourself for everything that is going to happen if he lets you live long enough to see it. We can’t be sure.” The man said without even looking back. He followed his companion through the corridor to the kitchen door. her and is refused. Kallisto needs to choose between Kelpie or going back to the fairy world to marry prince Kordelius. As the night comes, Kallisto goes home and so does Seti and of course his parents are all weird... (Remember, Seti used his forbidden power and left without an explanation... ) Then Seti was mysteriously pushed in his room, in the dark and apparently turned blind. For the past few weeks, Seti is trying to control the Chaos who wants to take over his body. We had some flash back to explain the relationship between Seti and the Chaos. Seti managed to open a hole in the wall while keeping the Chaos away, but how long can he stay in control?

Here are my 6 sentences, we start where we left off last week, in a new Chapter! Here is chapter 4! 

“They locked me again. I will kill them!” The Chaos yelled increasing the pain in Seti’s head, but Seti didn’t care anymore.
He was not listening. All he wanted was to see her and to make sure that it was safe.
He landed in a tree, near the street, and hid on a high branch behind leafs looking in direction of his house to see if somebody was following him.
“Let’s wait for them,” the Chaos said.
Seti stayed there staring at the street for few minutes.

Answers to last week's comments 

I thing we all agree that those guys with Seti's father were really lovely. It makes me happy to see how many of you have been coming for this story every week like for ever and that at the end of chapter three we all totally agreed about the story.

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  1. Seti has his work cut out for him! Good 8, Linda :-)

  2. The Chaos certainly seems to have a one track mind!

  3. Chaos does seemed to be in control. I do hope Seti will take over soon. :)

  4. Nice way building some tension here ... can't wait to read more!

  5. Wow, that is some serious world-building!

  6. I find myself urging on the demon? side so that Seti can survive.

  7. Very intense moment! Hope he can get control over it!

  8. I hope Seti feels up to a struggle. The Chaos just won't leave him alone.

  9. Oh, Chaos, give UP! Leave my friend Seti alone. (Of course then there'd be no story...) Great 8!

  10. Poor Seti! I hope he's strong enough to control Chaos. Great story!

  11. The Chaos seems pretty tough but Seti is proving to be a match for it. Nicely done.