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Let's continue Seti's adventure.
In the previous episodes: Seti let the chaos got out of him as
the father of his sister's fiance threaten to break the engagement.
Wild, he flies to the beach to see the only person near whom he can get
rid of the Chaos without pain, the fairy Kallisto in the Human world
below his. He can only observe her through a tidal pool. But this time,
she is in danger. Trying to rescue her from a snake, Seti lands in the
world below. However, as Kallisto tries to touch him, he flies away back
to his hidden place on the beach and listen to Kallisto's conversation
with her best friend Kelpie who once again proposes to “It is the first
time the Chaos manifested,” Seti’s father answered clenching his fists.
“Then it is bad luck, he shouldn’t have been born in the first place,
and he shouldn’t have stayed alive once born. Now, you can start blaming
yourself for everything that is going to happen if he lets you live
long enough to see it. We can’t be sure.” The man said without even
looking back. He followed his companion through the corridor to the
kitchen door. her and is
refused. Kallisto needs to choose between Kelpie or going back to the
fairy world to marry prince Kordelius. As the night comes, Kallisto goes
home and so does Seti and of course his parents are all weird...
(Remember, Seti used his forbidden power and left without an
explanation... ) Then Seti was mysteriously pushed in his room, in the
dark and apparently turned blind. For the past few weeks, Seti is trying
to control the Chaos who wants to take over his body. We had some flash
back to explain the relationship between Seti and the Chaos. Seti managed to open a hole in the wall while keeping the Chaos away, but how long can he stay in control?
“They locked me again. I will kill them!” The Chaos yelled increasing the pain in Seti’s head, but Seti didn’t care anymore.
He was not listening. All he wanted was to see her and to make sure that it was safe.
He landed in a tree, near the street, and hid on a high branch behind leafs looking in direction of his house to see if somebody was following him.
“Let’s wait for them,” the Chaos said.
Seti stayed there staring at the street for few minutes.
Answers to last week's comments
I thing we all agree that those guys with Seti's father were really lovely. It makes me happy to see how many of you have been coming for this story every week like for ever and that at the end of chapter three we all totally agreed about the story.
He was not listening. All he wanted was to see her and to make sure that it was safe.
He landed in a tree, near the street, and hid on a high branch behind leafs looking in direction of his house to see if somebody was following him.
“Let’s wait for them,” the Chaos said.
Seti stayed there staring at the street for few minutes.
Answers to last week's comments
I thing we all agree that those guys with Seti's father were really lovely. It makes me happy to see how many of you have been coming for this story every week like for ever and that at the end of chapter three we all totally agreed about the story.
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Seti has his work cut out for him! Good 8, Linda :-)
ReplyDeleteThe Chaos certainly seems to have a one track mind!
ReplyDeleteChaos does seemed to be in control. I do hope Seti will take over soon. :)
ReplyDeleteNice way building some tension here ... can't wait to read more!
ReplyDeleteWow, that is some serious world-building!
ReplyDeleteI find myself urging on the demon? side so that Seti can survive.
ReplyDeleteVery intense moment! Hope he can get control over it!
ReplyDeleteI hope Seti feels up to a struggle. The Chaos just won't leave him alone.
ReplyDeleteOh, Chaos, give UP! Leave my friend Seti alone. (Of course then there'd be no story...) Great 8!
ReplyDeletePoor Seti! I hope he's strong enough to control Chaos. Great story!
ReplyDeleteThe Chaos seems pretty tough but Seti is proving to be a match for it. Nicely done.
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