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Sunday, March 1, 2015

WeWriWar 92 Demon and Fairy


Welcome to a new excerpt of Demon and Fairy for the Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.
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In the previous episodes: Seti let the chaos got out of him as the father of his sister's fiance threaten to break the engagement. Wild, he flies to the beach to see the only person near whom he can get rid of the Chaos without pain, the fairy Kallisto in the Human world below his. He can only observe her through a tidal pool. But this time, she is in danger. Trying to rescue her from a snake, Seti lands in the world below. However, as Kallisto tries to touch him, he flies away back to his hidden place on the beach and listen to Kallisto's conversation with her best friend Kelpie who once again proposes to “It is the first time the Chaos manifested,” Seti’s father answered clenching his fists. “Then it is bad luck, he shouldn’t have been born in the first place, and he shouldn’t have stayed alive once born. Now, you can start blaming yourself for everything that is going to happen if he lets you live long enough to see it. We can’t be sure.” The man said without even looking back. He followed his companion through the corridor to the kitchen door. her and is refused. Kallisto needs to choose between Kelpie or going back to the fairy world to marry prince Kordelius. As the night comes, Kallisto goes home and so does Seti and of course his parents are all weird... (Remember, Seti used his forbidden power and left without an explanation... ) Then Seti was mysteriously pushed in his room, in the dark and apparently turned blind. For the past few weeks, Seti is trying to control the Chaos who wants to take over his body. We had some flash back to explain the relationship between Seti and the Chaos. Seti managed to open a hole in the wall while keeping the Chaos away, but how long can he stay in control?

Here are my 6 sentences, we start where we left off last week. Seti found the way out, but he was expected. 

“It is the first time the Chaos manifested,” Seti’s father answered clenching his fists.
“Then it is bad luck, he shouldn’t have been born in the first place, and he shouldn’t have stayed alive once born. Now, you can start blaming yourself for everything that is going to happen if he lets you live long enough to see it. We can’t be sure.” The man said without even looking back. He followed his companion through the corridor to the kitchen door.

Yes, only six sentences because...  End of chapter! 

So as a bonus here is a picture! I made this doll this week and she totally looks like Amarelis a character of "Demon and Fairy" who you haven't met yet.


Answers to last week's comments
 
Nice to see that you discovered a new angle to look at Seti's father last week. He will explain himself later, I hope no question will be unanswered for the people who read the book. 


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11 comments:

  1. Wow, those strangers are harsh! I'm really enjoying learning about Seti through the eyes of the others.

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  2. Uh oh. It looks like we might be getting to the crux of the matter.

    I love that doll's dress! Nice job--Linda. Your creativity flows many directions. :-)

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  3. These people surrounding Seti are mean and brutal. I feel bad for him.

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  4. Harsh-- he should have never have been allowed to live. Great end to the chapter.

    Love the doll!

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  5. Well that is harsh. Poor guy. Great snippet.

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  6. I love the doll! Interesting snippet today, the cards always seem stacked against poor Seti, but I'm pulling for him.

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  7. Wow! Interesting storyline. I'm curious to see where this leads... :)

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  8. I still feel sorry for poor Seti at the mercy of the chaos and scorned by others, but I do like the dolls.

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  9. Oh how horrible, "he shouldn’t have been born in the first place, and he shouldn’t have stayed alive once born" and to tell the father that he has only himself to blame. This line adds such a new dimension. Great snippet.

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  10. Wow. Now THAT'S the way to end a chapter. Heavy stuff.

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  11. Oh wow ... intense ... "if he lets you live long enough" ... well done.

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