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Today, we continue with Parallel Slip just where we left it.
"Thank
you," the younger man said, then he straightened himself. "I
mean, Yes Captain!"
And
he ran out of the room with his order.
"Captain,
have you lost your mind," the older man said. "With all due
respect..."
"Whenever
someone starts a sentence with that formula, I'm not sure how much
respect is left," I said standing up.
The
others seemed to take it as being dismissed. The older man stood up
and looked at me.
"Nobody,
ever, in this ship or another defied the protocol. Do you think that
because your father?" He started.
"This
has nothing to do with my father," I said.
Everything
about my father had always been a bit touchy even if my father and
the captain father were possibly different, I still had trouble with
the father part of our lifes.
The
man turned around to leave. It was just me in the room and two other
women, sitting on some sort of motorcycle without tires in front of
screens. It looked like a video game, but it wasn't. Behind their
analytic screen was a larger one. A glass panel. I walked around the
room to come closer to it. Millions of stars all around. On both
sides, another part of the ship, my ship. I looked at the reflection of
myself in the glass. I was wearing a white uniform with three stars
and a moon on my left side. I had short hair that didn't look too
bad. In this universe, mankind was already able to space travel and
in this universe, at seventeen I was in charge of a ship and I could
do it right. That was so different from my life, I could get used to
it. The sky was a pure wonder. Did the people living here still
looked at it? Or did they take it for granted just like people in my
universe took so many things for granted.
I
wanted to know what I had just decided on. I came back to the desk to have
a look at the document. My seat was the largest with five others on
each side placed in a half moon. I realized that the man I had put in
charge didn't have a seat at that table. He had stood in front of us
making his case.
"Captain?" One of the woman said, looking back at me. "If I may venture, I
think you did well not to leave Tucker push you into following the
protocol. They will kill us all if we continue what we always did."
The
other threw her a scared look. My other self might have been a scary
person.
"Thank
you," I said.
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More interesting developments. I love your world building.
ReplyDeleteI find this a bit hard for me to follow, but it is well written and artful. I do not follow scifi very well. I think it may be too complex for me to grasp. But, I love your writing. xo
ReplyDeleteGreat taster. Extremely thought provoking. Love it
ReplyDeleteGreat insight into your character's mind! What a life he has!
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