Hello everyone!
Welcome to Week-end Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday. Yesterday, I went shopping and as a result, I have a major headache, I can't go shopping without a headache, so I don't go shopping too often... Way to save money. But that shows why Seti has a headache so often, I guess.
Here are my 8 sentences, we start where we left off last week with the boy's mum telling him not to touch the ball.
Seti
didn’t know what was happening, what was so wrong with him that he
couldn’t even touch a ball? He was angry at everyone: the other
kids for throwing the ball at him, the boy for not taking the ball
back, his parents for not letting him on the blanket having the
pick-nick with them, the boy’s mum for not letting him play with
the ball, his father for apologizing as if he had done something
wrong. The Chaos was there, amplifying the anger and starting the
headache.
“We
have to go home now, you ruined everything,” his father said.
For
the first time, Seti had found the strength to answer.
“I
didn’t do anything wrong,” he said.
“What
if you had done it to the boy? How many times do I have to tell you
not to come near people?” his father said getting angrier too.
Answer to last week's comments:
The thing is, Seti was conditioned by other people around him to try and look "normal" and so he hid the Chaos. But as even with doing his best it's yet not enough, you never know what can happen.
The thing is, Seti was conditioned by other people around him to try and look "normal" and so he hid the Chaos. But as even with doing his best it's yet not enough, you never know what can happen.
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Great snippet this week. Poor kid, his dad just doesn't trust him.
ReplyDeletePoor, poor, Seti! So much emotions here. Great snippet.
ReplyDeleteI hope he gets control of the Chaos! I always wish the best for Seti, you've really got me hooked on this character. An enlightening snippet, with the backstory...
ReplyDeleteNo wonder he was getting a headache. Interesting snippet this week!
ReplyDeleteVery good. I can sense his confusion and frustration.
ReplyDeleteI feel so bad for Seti! Having to live like this his whole life. Great snippets showing his early days.
ReplyDeleteThis Chaos is a bummer. I hope it conquers it.
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