Welcome to a new Wednesday Hump Day Hook!
If you want more of it, click here, amazing writers are waiting for you to read their hooks!
But first, here is a little part of my parallel world travel story which
still doesn't have a real title. It's a
little rough and unedited as the first draft isn't finished yet. I hope
you won't get too confused Frederic is not really being herself. You better get used to that too, she does it a lot.
Enjoy!
"Captain,
have you lost your mind," the older man said. "With all due
respect..."
"Whenever
someone starts a sentence with that formula, I'm not sure how much
respect is left," I said standing up.
The
others seemed to take it as being dismissed. The older man stood up
and looked at me.
"Nobody,
ever, in this ship or another defied the protocol, do you think that
because your father," he started.
"This
has nothing to do with my father," I said.
Everything
about my father had always been a bit touchy even if my father and
the captain father were possibly different, I still had trouble with
the father part of our life.
The
man turned around to leave. It was just me in the room and two other
women, sitting on some sort of motorcycle without tires in front of
screens. It looked like a video game, but it wasn't. Behind their
analytic screen was a larger one. A glass panel. I walked around the
room to come closer to it. Millions of stars all around.
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Nice job
ReplyDeleteFantastic dialogue! Loved it
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