Welcome to a new Wednesday Hump Day Hook!
If you want more of it, click here, amazing writers are waiting for you to read their hooks!
But first, here is a little part of my parallel world travel story which
doesn't have a real title yet, so let's call it "Parallel slip". It's a
little rough and unedited as the first draft isn't finished yet. I hope
you won't get too confused.
Enjoy!
I'll
go to university," I said.
"No,
you won't, not until you agree to my terms, you do that two year
degree, my company already agreed to let me work from home for the
time of your study so that I can go live with you," she said.
"Doesn't what happened today teach you something?"
"Blacking
out is usual for me. What are you going to do? Going to class with
me? Going to the cafeteria with me at lunch time? Maybe you want to
go pee with me too? I can black out in the toilet, it never happened
before, but who knows," I said. I wondered how she couldn't see
how ridiculous she sounded.
"You're
just like your father, I can't understand you, there is no way to get
some sense into your head. He was..."
"Don't
talk about my dad, I don't want to hear it," I said.
"Well, you'll have to hear it anyway," she said.
I
walked out of the room, there was no way to talk to her, not in that
state, not ever.
"Frederique,
where do you think you are going? This conversation is not over,"
she said following me.
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Nice dialogue ... great hook
ReplyDeleteWould love to know what happens next, sounds intriguing. Toya
ReplyDeleteSounds good, would love to know what happens next. Toya
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