Sunday, September 28, 2014

WeWriWar 70 Demon and Fairy

Hello everyone!

Welcome to Week-end Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday. Today Seti is having a flash back about that time when the Chaos had decided to be friend... I didn't happen very often.

In the previous episodes: Seti let the chaos got out of him as the father of his sister's fiance threaten to break the engagement. Wild, he flies to the beach to see the only person near whom he can get rid of the Chaos without pain, the fairy Kallisto in the Human world below his. He can only observe her through a tidal pool. But this time, she is in danger. Trying to rescue her from a snake, Seti lands in the world below. However, as Kallisto tries to touch him, he flies away back to his hidden place on the beach and listen to Kallisto's conversation with her best friend Kelpie who once again proposes to her and is refused. Kallisto needs to choose between Kelpie or going back to the fairy world to marry prince Kordelius. As the night comes, Kallisto goes home and so does Seti and of course his parents are all weird... (Remember, Seti used his forbidden power and left without an explanation... ) Then Seti was mysteriously pushed in his room, in the dark and apparently turned blind. This week, Seti is trying to control the Chaos who wants to take over his body.

Here are my 8 sentences, the weirdness continues (He is Seti and It is the Chaos). And we start where we left off last week

He was nine years old at the time. He was at the park with his family. They had prepared some sandwiches. They were eating on a blanket not too far away and he had to stay under a tree, his lunch within a special basket separated from theirs. He was looking at the other kids playing with a ball, he wanted to go play with them and run but he knew that he couldn’t. If he had tried, they would have run away, and he would have gotten in trouble with his dad. He smiled a bit thinking that at that time his father was still impressive. Things had changed a lot on this particular day.

Answer to last week's comments:

Elena, maybe, and maybe not. There is a lot about the Chaos that Seti needs to uncover and the Chaos doesn't want him to.
Karen, I'm very, very sorry, but you'll have to wait until the end of the book, I know that totally sucks. ;)
Yes, you are right, self knowledge is the key, but it's also something hard to achieve.
And a big thanks for all the people who keep on asking for more. I love you guys!

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  1. Seti may have special abilities, but he seems to be searching for his place in the world just l like other kids. :)

  2. Maybe just me, but this seems a bit stilted. It just doesn't flow.
    Does Seti suffer from multiple personality disorder?
    Is Chaos one of his personalities?

  3. Great way to set up the scene in this snippet. Looking forward to next weeks!

  4. Interesting to have a glimpse into Seti's childhood. Great snippet!

  5. Faithfully following Seti's story and wondering if he'll ever accept/overcome the chaos. Fascinating.

  6. Oh wow, so it seems he was isolated his whole life! No wonder he has no clue how to work with the chaos . Very good Linda, and a great last line.
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  7. I feel sorry for him as a child. Nice snippet.

  8. So does that day exlain a lot about Seti?

  9. Hmm, interesting world for this Demon. Why is he different from other demon children?

  10. Interesting piece of reflection. Good snippet!