Welcome to Week-end Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.
I'm late with everything but I'm catching up. Sorry for the lack of interaction lately.
Here are my 8 sentences with creative punctuation for everything to fit, the weirdness continues (of course he is Seti).
For a second, he thought that she was going to touch him like she did before, but she walked away.
“Of
course, I’m fine, the shower is ready,” she said putting the
dishes in the sink and starting the water.
Seti
walked to the door and threw her a last look before walking in the
corridor.
“Did
you really need to be like that tonight again,” he heard his mother
say.
“It’s
not going to change anything anymore, it doesn’t matter, what has
to be done, has to be done,” he heard his father answer.
“It
is still our fault,” his mother answered.
“I
already told you not to think about it that way,” his father
answered.
“What
if we tell him the truth, maybe it would help him,” his mother
said.
Seti has a lot to think about.
His relationship with his parents has never been easy. It has rather been non-existent, since some particular day in his childhood... he'll tell someone about it, in a while.
Chip, she will say something like that but she needs time to get to it.
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Gah...I want to know the truth too! Have to come back next week.:D
ReplyDeleteAha! That age old conundrum of "do we them'em the truth?"
ReplyDeleteIn the deep South, we consider it "embellishment." LOL
Interesting. What do they need to tell him? Intriguing snippet.
ReplyDeleteinteresting piece - mysterious...
ReplyDeleteI agree with Mom. Truth, even if it hurts, should be told.
ReplyDeleteAnd what it is his parents know?
ReplyDeleteOh, a secret! Love secrets.
ReplyDeleteOoh, interesting final comment about there being truth to be revealed! I wonder what that will be about and how it affects Seti. Intriguing excerpt!
ReplyDeleteGreat little snippet! It has been a while since I have been around to read, but it's good to be back reading more about Seti again.
ReplyDeleteThe family dynamics are so intriguing. I sense a lot of disappointment, but I am not sure why. Seems sad. well done.
ReplyDeleteNice work... exactly the kind of conversation that needs to be overheard.
ReplyDeleteOooh... I want to know what the truth is that they are keeping from him. Great snippet, Linda!
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