Welcome to Week-end Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.
As it has been a year of Sunday snippet already, I was thinking about
changing story but I'm thinking you all want to know what is happening
to Seti so... I might as well continue of Demon and Fairy for a while
even though Harajuku Kiss is going to come out soon.
Today is the start of JuNoWriMo. Anybody else participating? I should reach my 1M half way!
Here are my 8 sentences with creative punctuation for everything to fit, the weirdness continues (of course he is Seti).
“No, I really like it,
it’s kind of relaxing, you should try it sometimes,” Seti said
getting up to tidy the table. He could hear a slow humming starting
in his head.
“I’ll do it,” his
mum said entering the room. She took his plate out of his hand and
for a second their eyes met, they hadn’t been so close in years
even while living in the same house.
“Mum, are you ok?”
for a second Seti felt like the little boy he once was.
He had stopped calling
her mum soon after that day. He had even given
up calling her for help in his sleep.
Answer to last week's comments:
Thank you, for last week comments. Seti's family is slightly dysfunctional but everything will be revealed in due time. Seti will have to dig a little bit deeper to get the answer to his parents behaviour, that is once he'll have figure out who he really is.
LuAnn, I'm French so you can ask me. ;)
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No worries Linda, I was late today too. Storm on and off all day so I don't plug in my laptop. :)
ReplyDeleteVery touching scene between mother and son. And personally, I think Seti needs to do something about his Kallisto problem ..... like give her another choice.
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Interesting snippet. I love this line: "...for a second their eyes met, they hadn't been so close in years even while living in the same house." and I'm very curious to know what happened that he stopped calling her "Mum."
ReplyDeleteI can just hear a mother saying to herself, "No matter how old your are, you're still my baby boy."
ReplyDeleteNice 8!