Sunday, April 20, 2014

Demon and Fairy WeWriWar 47

Hello everyone !

Welcome to Week-end Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.
April is here and I'm participating to the A-to-Z challenge and Camp NaNoWriMo, I'm finishing Blue Angel which draft can be find here. And last Friday I got eliminated from LJ Idol, blah :P.
Anyway, today, Kelpie is getting mad.

In the previous episodes: Seti was in pain and flying to see Kallisto who is the only person who can help him get rid of it. He remembered how he had met her the first time but unfortunately this time it was late at night and she was nowhere to be seen. Seti couldn't spend the night on the Beach and decided to fly home not noticing that another demon entered her house. We followed Seti and discovered his chaotic bedroom before meeting his family for breakfast. They were arguing about Seti's sister's arranged wedding being canceled by the other family and Samira was crying. Their father said that Seti would just have to apologize. and we learn what Seti thinks about the situation. Seti met the twin's father and gave him an unexpected apology demon style which scared everyone around except Taram who had been spying at the scene from the stairs with his twin brother Torin. After the confrontation, as always when he has a headache, Seti flew to the beach and fell asleep near the tidal pool. When Seti waked, he saw Kallisto facing a snake he managed to get through the barrier and stop it from attacking her, at the moment he is about to kill the snake, Kallisto tells him to stop and had him let the snake on the other side of the barrier. Then Seti had an unexpected reaction but Kallisto didn't going to let him go that easily. Kallisto seems to have a very strange combination of people taking care of the security of the house, which scares Seti a little bit while Kallisto seems to consider that he is her best protection. He decided to fly away then notice the arrival of Kelpie. Kelpie had just ask Kallisto if he has already told her about Kordelius' ugliness. Seti is still around listening to their conversation. Kelpie is going straight to the point. Seti wanted to run away, but still decided to stay. Kelpie continues to tell Kallisto she should married her so she decided to give him a love test. Kallisto asked him: "What do you love about me?" Seti's answered in his head, then we saw Kelpie's answer to Kallisto and the argument that follows. Let's see what will happen now that Kelpie is gone. 

Here are my 8 sentences, we start just where we left of. (With creative punctuation to fit in.)

The fairies flew back to the tree, disappearing from Seti’s sight, Kallisto blew on the last one to make her fly away as she was waving at her. Seti sighed seeing her so cute, he wanted this moment to last forever, but he knew that she was going to go home, and that he would have to do the same. His father was going to yell at him about what had happened in the morning; his stomach rambled. He hadn’t eaten anything since breakfast and was really hungry. Kallisto looked up. 
For one second, he felt as if she was able to see him. 
“Please, come tomorrow again,” she muttered just loud enough for him to hear. “I want to see you, I want to see you so much.”

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  1. Awww... that last line is just so sweet and touching... She sounds lonely.

  2. Love it! I knew she could tell Seti was there :-) Ummm, I think you mean his stomach rumbled? Not rambled...small typo LOL. Another great excerpt - I want these two to get together.

  3. So she did know (or at least suspect) that he was there.

  4. Ah...Seti was not so secret in his spying was he?Nice one Linda. I wasn't expecting her to know he was there.
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  5. Kallisto is finally fessing up! Good snippet, Linda. :-)

  6. Loved this. Cute and sweet! I hope he takes her up on her plea : )

  7. She definitely sounds lonely. Hope it works out for her!