Sunday, April 13, 2014

Demon and Fairy WeWriWar 46


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Welcome to Week-end Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.
April is here and I'm participating to the A-to-Z challenge and Camp NaNoWriMo, I'm finishing Blue Angel which draft can be find here. And last Friday I got eliminated from LJ Idol, blah :P.
Anyway, today, Kelpie is getting mad.

In the previous episodes: Seti was in pain and flying to see Kallisto who is the only person who can help him get rid of it. He remembered how he had met her the first time but unfortunately this time it was late at night and she was nowhere to be seen. Seti couldn't spend the night on the Beach and decided to fly home not noticing that another demon entered her house. We followed Seti and discovered his chaotic bedroom before meeting his family for breakfast. They were arguing about Seti's sister's arranged wedding being canceled by the other family and Samira was crying. Their father said that Seti would just have to apologize. and we learn what Seti thinks about the situation. Seti met the twin's father and gave him an unexpected apology demon style which scared everyone around except Taram who had been spying at the scene from the stairs with his twin brother Torin. After the confrontation, as always when he has a headache, Seti flew to the beach and fell asleep near the tidal pool. When Seti waked, he saw Kallisto facing a snake he managed to get through the barrier and stop it from attacking her, at the moment he is about to kill the snake, Kallisto tells him to stop and had him let the snake on the other side of the barrier. Then Seti had an unexpected reaction but Kallisto didn't going to let him go that easily. Kallisto seems to have a very strange combination of people taking care of the security of the house, which scares Seti a little bit while Kallisto seems to consider that he is her best protection. He decided to fly away then notice the arrival of Kelpie. Kelpie had just ask Kallisto if he has already told her about Kordelius' ugliness. Seti is still around listening to their conversation. Kelpie is going straight to the point. Seti wanted to run away, but still decided to stay. Kelpie continues to tell Kallisto she should married her so she decided to give him a love test. Kallisto asked him: "What do you love about me?" Seti's answered in his head, then we saw Kelpie's answer to Kallisto and the argument that follows. Let's see what will happen now that Kelpie is gone. 

Here are my 8 sentences, we start just where we left of. (With creative punctuation to fit in.)

“I don’t want to marry Kordelius either; why does my life need to be that difficult with boys and why does everybody think they have to choose for me?”
It was more of a rhetorical question; the type of fairy she was friend with didn’t really understand much the human part of her heart.
She took her flute back to play a last song to the fairies. It seems to Seti to be sadder than usual. She finished with a really long note. She stood up and some of the fairies pulled on her hair and pushed her to sit down again. “Stop that! You all know that I need to go home for dinner, it’s getting really dark,” she said giggling.

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7 comments:

  1. That was such a cute scene with her playing to the varies and them tugging on her hair. I could so visualize that.
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  2. Very nice details and I liked the scene. My only comment is your last sentence. Maybe it should be "she said with a giggle"? Good snippet overall!

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  3. I feel sorry for her -- not being able to make her own choices.

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  4. Oh those mischievous fairies! Of course she's sad, no one wants to be told who they are going to marry!

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  5. I thoroughly enjoy the fairies! Fun snippet!

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  6. So is she some kind of a crossbred?

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