Sunday, March 9, 2014

Demon and Fairy WeWriWar 41

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Today, let's hear Kelpie's answer.

In the previous episodes: Seti was in pain and flying to see Kallisto who is the only person who can help him get rid of it. He remembered how he had met her the first time but unfortunately this time it was late at night and she was nowhere to be seen. Seti couldn't spend the night on the Beach and decided to fly home not noticing that another demon entered her house. We followed Seti and discovered his chaotic bedroom before meeting his family for breakfast. They were arguing about Seti's sister's arranged wedding being canceled by the other family and Samira was crying. Their father said that Seti would just have to apologize. and we learn what Seti thinks about the situation. Seti met the twin's father and gave him an unexpected apology demon style which scared everyone around except Taram who had been spying at the scene from the stairs with his twin brother Torin. After the confrontation, as always when he has a headache, Seti flew to the beach and fell asleep near the tidal pool. When Seti waked, he saw Kallisto facing a snake he managed to get through the barrier and stop it from attacking her, at the moment he is about to kill the snake, Kallisto tells him to stop and had him let the snake on the other side of the barrier. Then Seti had an unexpected reaction but Kallisto didn't going to let him go that easily. Kallisto seems to have a very strange combination of people taking care of the security of the house, which scares Seti a little bit while Kallisto seems to consider that he is her best protection. He decided to fly away then notice the arrival of Kelpie. Kelpie had just ask Kallisto if he has already told her about Kordelius' ugliness. Seti is still around listening to their conversation. Kelpie is going straight to the point. Seti wanted to run away, but still decided to stay. Kelpie continues to tell Kallisto she should married her so she decided to give him a love test. Kallisto asked him: "What do you love about me?" Seti's answered in his head, then we saw Kelpie's answer to Kallisto. Today we have Seti's reaction to the answer.

Here are my 8 sentences, we start just where we left of. (With creative punctuation to fit in.)

Seti smiled, he wouldn’t have said anything like that because when she asked the question his mind just went blank. When he had closed his eyes for a second he had just seen her face in front of him, like he always did since the day he discovered the passage to her world. He had waited for Kelpie to give him a clue. He was a bit scared that she would also ask him the question, he didn’t know her as well as Kelpie did.
But she won’t,” he thought for himself, “she won’t because I am going to protect her from myself and never going down there again”. He sighed. Happiness was not made for him, not with the Chaos burning to get out of him.
It’s silly, of course I would have say something like that, but you can’t know because you’re the one who doesn’t love anyone,” Kelpie said.

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  1. Without knowing it, Seti would say the right thing : )

  2. I still want to know what kind of answer she was looking for. Nice snippet.

  3. The rivalry continues to build! :-) Good 8, Linda :-)

  4. Is Seti really that self-sacrificing? (I think you're missing a quatation mark at the beginning of the last sentence.)

  5. Love the way you're building the suspense.