Sunday, March 2, 2014

Demon and Fairy WeWriWar 40

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Today, let's hear Kelpie's answer.

In the previous episodes: Seti was in pain and flying to see Kallisto who is the only person who can help him get rid of it. He remembered how he had met her the first time but unfortunately this time it was late at night and she was nowhere to be seen. Seti couldn't spend the night on the Beach and decided to fly home not noticing that another demon entered her house. We followed Seti and discovered his chaotic bedroom before meeting his family for breakfast. They were arguing about Seti's sister's arranged wedding being canceled by the other family and Samira was crying. Their father said that Seti would just have to apologize. and we learn what Seti thinks about the situation. Seti met the twin's father and gave him an unexpected apology demon style which scared everyone around except Taram who had been spying at the scene from the stairs with his twin brother Torin. After the confrontation, as always when he has a headache, Seti flew to the beach and fell asleep near the tidal pool. When Seti waked, he saw Kallisto facing a snake he managed to get through the barrier and stop it from attacking her, at the moment he is about to kill the snake, Kallisto tells him to stop and had him let the snake on the other side of the barrier. Then Seti had an unexpected reaction but Kallisto didn't going to let him go that easily. Kallisto seems to have a very strange combination of people taking care of the security of the house, which scares Seti a little bit while Kallisto seems to consider that he is her best protection. He decided to fly away then notice the arrival of Kelpie. Kelpie had just ask Kallisto if he has already told her about Kordelius' ugliness. Seti is still around listening to their conversation. Kelpie is going straight to the point. Seti wanted to run away, but still decided to stay. Kelpie continues to tell Kallisto she should married her so she decided to give him a love test. Last week she asked him: "What do you love about me?" Last time we saw Seti's answer in his head, this time we will see Kelpie's answer to Kallisto. 

Here are my 8 sentences, we start just where we left of. (With creative punctuation to fit in.)

“I love your eyes and your green hair and how you play the flute and that you are a fairy and you will probably have beautiful wings once you reach the Fairy World and…” Kelpie paused scratching his head, he was forgetting something, and he didn’t know what it could be.
Kallisto sighed “You failed.”
“Wait, I’m not done yet, you are nice and you make me laugh and…” he continued.
“I didn’t ask for a list of my qualities, I know them already, I don’t need you to tell me more, you failed, there is no point to continue,” Kallisto said.
“And how did I fail, what wrong did I say?” Kelpie asked a bit angry, he was so sure to do well it was unfair to fail him without even telling him what was wrong and what the correct answer was.
“If you really loved me you wouldn’t have say anything like that,” she answered.

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  1. Wow! She's tough. What answer was she looking for? He was stumbling, but he was trying. :-)

  2. I almost feel sorry for Kelpie. Poor guy can't seem to win!

  3. Oh, I wonder why Kallisto is angry with Kelpie. What did he say wrong. I loved the tense dialogue exchange between them. Good 8!

  4. Poor guy just can't get it right with her. the fact he stays around should give her a clue.

  5. What did she want to hear? I'd be happy with a list that long. haha

  6. Interesting response. What does she want from him?

  7. She is pretty tough. I wonder what answer will satisfy her.

  8. Maybe just "I love you because you're you?"

  9. Poor guy! What he came up with sounded pretty good to me. I wonder what she expected him to say and why she's so demanding.

  10. Kallisto isn't happy, is she? good job.

  11. Hmmm...what will it take to make her believe?