She was wondering if her
white knight was here to hear that and wished he wasn’t.
“I’m really the best
for you,” Kelpie said stopping the swing. “I know you’ll see it
soon enough but you need to hurry to agree with the terms so that we
can celebrate our wedding before your fifteenth birthday, you don’t
have much time left…”
Seti was looking at her
anxiously, his heart seemed to stop beating in his chest and he
didn’t remember ever feeling so sad. Even when everybody walked
away from him out of fear the very first time, he coped with it. He
had heard the story before but now he had met her, it was different.
A part of him wanted to run away and never come back, to forget about
everything that happened with her.
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Oh Seti, don't leave! Great snippet.
ReplyDeletePoor Seti! I hope she says something to set his mind (and heart) at ease.
ReplyDeleteOh, I feel so sad for Seti! Stop the wedding!! Lots of emotion in this snippet Linda. Good job.
ReplyDeleteThe Murders of Polly Frisch
(Sorry I missed you last week!)
OK, Seti, dude, seriously, time to man up and take a risk with her! Total Seti fan here but I want him to be bold LOL. Great snippet, got me all riled up on his behalf, can you tell? I don't want him to lose this great girl.
ReplyDeleteI like it!
ReplyDeleteSad for him to hear her deciding between two other suitors.
ReplyDeleteIs there an age limit? Sounds like it.
ReplyDeleteInteresting story! One of my first snippet readings. I'm Looking forward to reading more.
ReplyDeleteI doubt he's a quitter but he's certainly going to have his work cut out to save her from this.
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