Game version of Seti and Kallisto |
“You can’t really
marry a guy like that. It is too horrible,” Kelpie continued.
Seti nodded in agreement,
he was shaking just thinking about it. Kallisto hadn’t been
listening for the main part of Kelpie’s rant, it was always the
same. She was even mimicking him to amuse the fairies when he was
away.
“And you will have to
go to the Fairy World forever and never come back here, it’s not
really the best place to be, especially that you kind of like humans
as strange as that is,” Kelpie said.
“She is going to
leave,” Seti said out loud as to make the thought disappear from
his head by blowing the words out, “She is going to leave.”
The thought tore a hole
in his heart and he had trouble to focus on the rest of Kelpie’s
talk.
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Awww... Poor Seti. I hope he gets the courage to go back to her.
ReplyDeleteOne chance out between two worlds.
ReplyDeleteWhat will it be?
At some point, everyone faces a decision of great importance that will impact the rest of their life.
How many chances do we get?
Well done.
Aw, such emotion. Lovely snippet heartfelt and beautifully written.
ReplyDelete"The thought tore a hole in his heart..." Love that line, Linda. Kallisto is being a brat! Good 8 :-)
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OK at least Seti is paying attention. Now take ACTION, dude! Enjoying the story, another excellent snippet!
ReplyDeleteAww...he's hurting so much. Great eight. I just love that last line.
ReplyDeleteI like the characters at the point of decision. You will have to go to the Faerie World and never come back. Just like marriage. You go to the married world and you can never come back. At least not the same. I will have to read more. Nice.
ReplyDeleteSO much love and emotion and humor. Charming eight.
ReplyDeleteIf he doesn't do something soon he's going to lose her, methinks.
ReplyDeleteLovely emotional piece.
ReplyDeleteSeti's pain comes through, but watch you verb use.
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