This month I'm participating to
NaNoWriMo and all the draft of my new WIP
Blue Angel will be available daily
here.
In the previous episodes:
Seti was in pain and flying to see
Kallisto
who is the only person who can help him get ride of it. He remembered
how he had met her the first time but unfortunately this time it was
late at night and she was nowhere to be seen. Seti couldn't spend the
night on the Beach and decided to fly home not noticing that another
demon entered her house. We followed Seti and discovered his chaotic
bedroom before meeting his family for breakfast. They were arguing about
Seti's sister's arranged wedding being canceled by the other family and
Samira was crying. Their father said that Seti would just have to
apologize. and we learn what Seti thinks about the situation. Seti met
the twin's father and gave him an unexpected apology demon style which
scared everyone around except Taram who had been spying at the scene
from the stairs with his twin brother Torin. After the confrontation, as
always when he has a headache, Seti flew to the beach and fell asleep
near the tidal pool. When Seti waked, he saw Kallisto facing a snake he
managed to get through the barrier and stop it from attacking her, at
the moment he is about to kill the snake, Kallisto tells him to stop and
had him let the snake on the other side of the barrier. Then Seti had
an unexpected reaction but Kallisto didn't going to let him go that
easily. Kallisto seems to have a very strange combination of people
taking care of the security of the house, which scares Seti a little bit
while Kallisto seems to consider that he is her best protection. He
decided to fly away then notice the arrival of Kelpie.
Here are my 8 sentences. Today, let's introduce a new character.
“Don’t come too close you’re
all wet,” Kallisto said laughing.
Kelpie shook his hair in front of
her face splashing her with some more water.
“I know you like that,” he
said laughing too.
“Just for today, I can’t get
mad today,” she said looking at the sky through the fairy tree
branches.
Kelpie sat on the ground his back
against the trunk and started to play with the grass. A little fairy
came to play with his hair but he pushed her away. She seemed a bit
shocked and flew back to sit on Kallisto’s shoulder.
“And what happened today? The
fairies also seemed pretty excited,” Kelpie said.
I can't help but wonder how jealous Kelpie is going to be when he finds out about Seti.
ReplyDelete"... the sky through the fairy tree branches."
ReplyDeleteGood line.
I like that description.
Well done!
Could it be someone's birthday. ;)
ReplyDeleteI like how you show the character state of mind with their words and actions.
Interesting eight. This reader is fascinated by your imagination.
ReplyDeleteI look forward to this conversation! Great imagery in this scene!
ReplyDeleteAnd.... Happy Birthday! Hope you have wonderful day!!
I love the playfulness of this piece! =D
ReplyDeleteOh, Kelpie's going to find out he has no chance : )
ReplyDeleteIf the fairies are excited it must be big.
ReplyDeleteDon't think I've seen this character before.
ReplyDeleteNice excerpt. Intriguing characters. Looking forward to reading more.
ReplyDeleteWill Kallisto be willing to share what has her so excited? Intriguing snippet.
ReplyDeleteI don't know that I'd like a fairy messing with my hair either... but that fairy seems a little upset.
ReplyDeleteI love this world so intriguing
ReplyDeleteGreat description, and I definitely want to know more about the faeries. Enjoyed your 8!
ReplyDeleteOoh! The description is great, but I love the way the happiness and excitement shines through. Great work and hope you had a great birthday!
ReplyDeleteGreat addition, Linda! Give Seti a little competition, and give her the opportunity to prove how much she loves Seti! Nice snippet :-) Good development.
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