It's Wednesday and I thought it was Tuesday and I even thought tomorrow was Thursday without Wednesday in between. My brain, my brain. Anyway, it's
Hump Day Hook again. Find the other writers
here. It's also
Mid-Week Tease, you can find the other writers
here.
If you miss my other hooks, they can all be found
here.
Attic Mirror is finally available as a kindle on amazon
here and as a pdf on Etsy
here and on smashwords
here.
Last week as there was no Hump Day Hook I gave you a Tease for
Blue Angel.
This time, we will continue with
Attic Mirror. Hitomi and Demian are having an Yloc talk which degenerate to an ostrich talk
““Of course not! Animals don’t
carry things, especially ostriches. We have cars and trucks for
that”, she answered.
In front of his bland look she
started flipping the pages of the dictionary again.
“It’s a car”, she said.
“And you can go inside?” he
asked.
“Sure”, she said pointing at
the different parts, “here you have the driver and here and here
the passengers.” And she turned the pages to show him a truck.
“How do you feed them? They must
eat a lot”, he said.
“Well we use gasoline. It’s a
sort of black and nauseating liquid. You put inside and it makes it
run for a while”, Hitomi said.
“So you don’t need anything to
pull it?” Demian asked.
“No, it works mechanically”,
Hitomi said.
“It’s good because it looks
really heavy, I wonder how many Ylocs would be needed to move it”,
Demian said looking at the picture and then at his own book.
“It is really heavy”, Hitomi
said nodding.
“It looks cool though, I would
like to try getting in sometimes. Here we do everything with the
Ylocs”, he said.
“How do you do that?” she
asked.”
REally nice dialogue here... Great hook x
ReplyDeleteIntriguing :-)
ReplyDeleteNice how you show the differences between the two worlds. :)
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