Let's have a little recap of what happened in the preceding episodes.
In the previous episodes:
Seti was in pain and flying to see
Kallisto
who is the only person who can help him get ride of it. He remembered
how he had met her the first time but unfortunately this time it was
late at night and she was nowhere to be seen. Seti couldn't spend the
night on the Beach and decided to fly home not noticing that another
demon entered her house. We followed Seti and discovered his chaotic
bedroom before meeting his family for breakfast. They were arguing about
Seti's sister's arranged wedding being canceled by the other family and
Samira was crying. Their father said that Seti would just have to
apologize. and we learn what Seti thinks about the situation. Seti met
the twin's father and gave him an unexpected apology demon style which
scared everyone around except Taram who had been spying at the scene
from the stairs with his twin brother Torin. After the confrontation, as
always when he has a headache, Seti flew to the beach and fell asleep
near the tidal pool. When Seti waked, he saw Kallisto facing a snake he
managed to get through the barrier and stop it from attacking her, at
the moment he is about to kill the snake, Kallisto tells him to stop and
had him let the snake on the other side of the barrier. Then Seti had
an unexpected reaction but Kallisto didn't going to let him go that
easily. Kallisto seems to have a very strange combination of people taking care of the security of the house.
Here are my 8 sentences. Kallisto is a being a little stubborn.
“No, I mean you,” she said raising her hand to touch him but she remembered his reaction and stopped before reaching him.
“At least she learned that,” he thought for himself.
“But I’m not always here,” he said.
“I’ll be just fine waiting for you,” she said smiling and sitting on the swing.
“What if I don’t come back?” he answered. He didn’t know if he would ever be able to cross the barrier again once he went back to his world.
“You are my white knight falling from the sky to rescue me, so each time I need you, you will be here I don’t need to be afraid of anything ever again now that I have you,” she said softly.
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“At least she learned that,” he thought for himself.
“But I’m not always here,” he said.
“I’ll be just fine waiting for you,” she said smiling and sitting on the swing.
“What if I don’t come back?” he answered. He didn’t know if he would ever be able to cross the barrier again once he went back to his world.
“You are my white knight falling from the sky to rescue me, so each time I need you, you will be here I don’t need to be afraid of anything ever again now that I have you,” she said softly.
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She certainly has a lot of faith in him.
ReplyDeleteYou made me curious about your story. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteShe seems rather confident that she will see him again.
ReplyDeleteNice 8!
It seems like a few more dangers are coming before they can be together. Nice foreboding with Kallisto's last line.
ReplyDeleteWhat a declaration. I wonder what he'll say about her confidence in him. Nice 8.
ReplyDeleteI like the flow of the prose. Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteShe expects so much from him, hope he can deliver! Lovely snippet.
ReplyDeleteInteresting snippet. Can't wait to see Seti's reaction to that last line.
ReplyDeleteSeti needs to believe as much as she does...but then I like Seti a LOT. Fun snippet, a little wistful.
ReplyDeleteShe is trusting and yet confidant. It makes me wonder if she has dominant powers. :)
ReplyDeleteemotional dialogue between the two. the one line in quotes sounds like its his thought and not talking. you might separate it with bold or italics without quotes to keep it from looking like speech. great 8 Linda
ReplyDeleteI agree with others - she seems to be a very confident, but trusting person. She's intriguing! And I do hope she's right...
ReplyDeleteI'm loving her confidence and I'm so curious what Seti's reaction will be. Oh boy.
ReplyDeleteJust because she believes that doesn't make it true--but I bet he'll make it back to her anyway.
ReplyDeleteThat's quite a statement of trust! Very romantic, too. :D
ReplyDelete"white Knight falling from the sky." I like that. (Don't remember if you have a captcha, but I won't try more than once if you do.)
ReplyDeleteNice exchange here. Good eight!
ReplyDeleteShe is so optimistic! Great 8!
ReplyDeleteAwe, it's a happily ever after moment. ;-) But it is a fairy-tale, right. :-) Good 8, Linda! And thanks for the advice on my wewriwa post!
ReplyDeleteSweet moment! Definitely felt the stubbornness ;)
ReplyDeleteAh. They seem to really care for each other. :)
ReplyDeleteKallisto is an interesting personality. I'm thinking he is quite confused by her. She seems strong, yet not with her comment to him. She is very confident he will be there is she needs him. But can he get back? Nice snippet Linda.
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