Hello Warriors and dear readers.
Thank you so much for all the comments you left on last week-end snippet and special thanks to
Cindy and Natalie for the edits, Siren Star for the shout out and Sharon for the head up about autocrit.
Now let's go to this week snippet, more on Demon and Fairy
In the previous episodes, Seti was in pain and flying to see Kallisto
who is the only person who can help him get ride of it. He remembered
how he had met her the first time but unfortunately this time it was
late at night and she was nowhere to be seen. Seti couldn't spend the
night on the Beach and decided to fly home not noticing that another
demon entered her house. Last week we discovered Seti's chaotic bedroom today we are going to meet his family.
Here are my 8 sentences
He opened the kitchen door. His father was sitting at the
table arguing with his mother and his sister was in tears.
“The day had started so well”, Seti thought for himself.
“He is not good for you”, his father said.
Samira didn’t answer, she didn’t care really, she knew that already.
“It was decided before they were born, our first son marry their
first daughter or our first daughter marry their first son, they can’t change
everything like that after eighteen years”, Seti’s mother said probably for the
tenth times in a row.
“Well Seti will have to apologize then. It’s probably all he wants”,
Seti’s father answered.
And of course, Good Morning Seti !! I hope you enjoyed today's excerpt and see you next week for more of Seti's adventures.
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Not your average, ordinary family! :-D They certainly do argue like one though. Interesting story and I'm looking forward to the next instalment.
ReplyDeleteOh, I feel for her. Sounds like she's a tough situation.
ReplyDeleteSounds like a huge pickle they're all in. Interesting! :-)
ReplyDeleteI guess we'll find out if an apology is all they want. Nice 8.
ReplyDeleteArranged marriage holds so many possibilities...will they fall in love or will it be traumatic? It's sort of like the ultimate gamble. Can't wait to see what happens.
ReplyDeleteCurious snippet. Family dynamics are always so interesting.
ReplyDeletequite the conondrum
ReplyDeleteApologize or not to apologize...hmm... can't wait to find out. :)
ReplyDeletePoor Seti, things going bad to worse obviously! Good luck to him!
ReplyDeleteInterested to see how this all works out! Enjoyed the snippet.
ReplyDelete~Joyce Scarbrough
Seti...I like that! And a nice snippet.
ReplyDeleteWhat a scene to walk into. I feel terrible for her. Great job at pulling at our heart strings. :)
ReplyDeleteAh, an arranged marriage. While there is something to said for tradition, I feel for her!
ReplyDeleteHmmm. "That's all he wants"?? Somehow I don't think that's true.
ReplyDeleteThis sounds like their trouble is only getting started. Why do I have the feeling an apology isn't going to be enough?
ReplyDeleteWhy would Seti have to apologize? Realistic dialogue between the family.
ReplyDeleteI'm coming into this story late, but I suspect that the arranged marriage is not a good thing.
ReplyDeleteI love getting to see the dynamics of a family amongst such fantastic settings. You got down the family squabble feel perfectly!
ReplyDeleteOuch. Sounds like a difficult situation. Great snippet.
ReplyDeleteUh, oh. Sounds serious...arranged marriages are always "interesting."
ReplyDeleteArranged marriage. Oh my. Does the family lose something if they don't marry? I'm curious why Seti is the one who has to apologize. Very realistic. Who hasn't walked into a family argument and wanted to slowly back out of the room.
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Updated Romeo and Juliet in the making. Great premise.
ReplyDeleteOh no - an arranged marriage in the works - this is not looking good for Seti (or his sister - love her name, Samira, really unique:)
ReplyDeleteWriterlySam
Interesting insight into the family. Sorry for my late response. I am still learning how this works!
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