Sunday, August 16, 2015

WeWriWar 116: Rainbow Catcher


Welcome to a new excerpt of Rainbow Catcher for the Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday
Then Demon and Fairy is also available for free for reviewers through Shut Up & Read. You can have a look at it here if you want.

Now let's go back to our story.
Summary of previous episodes: Clarissa is coughing and wanted to watch Everett Cooper on TV but Jason refused, she is due to get her rainbow the next day but she seems scared, to make her feel better Jason leave the TV on. Clarissa tried to explain about rainbows, she is a big fan of Everett Cooper but Jason is not too sure about it. Clarissa complained about her dialophone but Jason needs to go to work. Before completely leaving he is thinking about getting her her rainbow.
We start just where we left off last week.

“What kind of merchandise are you looking for?” the man asked sitting down.
His weight made the bench bend under him with a cracking sound. He put his attaché-case loudly on the table, it also seemed wet.
Jason wondered if the man wasn't trying to escape someone else before meeting him. The entire situation was more awkward than expected. Jason had been waiting for someone professional who would do the job quickly and properly.
“How do you catch rainbows?” he asked.

Answer to last week's comments: 

I'm glad you enjoyed the description. I was trying to make that character as disagreable as possible.

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10 comments:

  1. Left a comment also at the Shut Up and Read group. Looks like this one is coming along!

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  2. That is definitely a good question. I look forward to the answer.

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  3. I want to know how to capture rainbows, too.

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  4. I thought he was planning to buy one, not planning to go catch his own. I love this!

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  5. I thought the nasty man had rainbows in his case. I guess Jason was just buying some info on how to capture the rainbow?

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  6. nice scene. I can only imagine it to be awkward.

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  7. Can't wait for the answer to that question! Enjoyed the snippet....

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  8. I worry that he is just digging himself in deeper and deeper. I hope things will work out.

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  9. Something seems fishy about this guy...

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  10. Yes, exactly how DOES one catch rainbows?

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