Sunday, April 26, 2015

WeWriWar 100 Demon and Fairy

Welcome to a new excerpt of Demon and Fairy for the Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.

This is my 100 time blogging for the Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday! And I'm really sad to announce that it will be the last excerpt of Demon and Fairy, but not my last participation so new week, we will be starting on a new story.

In the previous episodes: Seti let the chaos got out of him as the father of his sister's fiance threaten to break the engagement. Wild, he flies to the beach to see the only person near whom he can get rid of the Chaos without pain, the fairy Kallisto in the Human world below his. He can only observe her through a tidal pool. But this time, she is in danger. Trying to rescue her from a snake, Seti lands in the world below. However, as Kallisto tries to touch him, he flies away back to his hidden place on the beach and listen to Kallisto's conversation with her best friend Kelpie who once again proposes to “It is the first time the Chaos manifested,” Seti’s father answered clenching his fists. “Then it is bad luck, he shouldn’t have been born in the first place, and he shouldn’t have stayed alive once born. Now, you can start blaming yourself for everything that is going to happen if he lets you live long enough to see it. We can’t be sure.” The man said without even looking back. He followed his companion through the corridor to the kitchen door. her and is refused. Kallisto needs to choose between Kelpie or going back to the fairy world to marry prince Kordelius. As the night comes, Kallisto goes home and so does Seti and of course his parents are all weird... (Remember, Seti used his forbidden power and left without an explanation... ) Then Seti was mysteriously pushed in his room, in the dark and apparently turned blind. For the past few weeks, Seti is trying to control the Chaos who wants to take over his body. We had some flash back to explain the relationship between Seti and the Chaos. Seti managed to open a hole in the wall while keeping the Chaos away, but how long can he stay in control? 

Here are my 8 sentences, we start where we left off last week. Seti had stopped to wait and see what the others would do.

“Are you all ready?” Kallisto asked.
The little fairies answered in a cacophony of crystalline noises.
“Fine, let’s go,” Kallisto said smiling.
A green and flowery wave moved toward the house carrying Seti surrounded by the fairies. Kallisto was staying near. She was floating lightly in the air. Suddenly, as they arrived at the bottom of the wall, one side dropped and Kallisto had to use all her strength to make sure Seti didn’t fall.

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  1. I hope something good is going to come for Seti. Looking forward to your new story.

  2. So she touched him?? did anything happen? Sneaky of you to stop here. Great snippet Linda :-)

  3. Wow. this almost sounds like some kind of triumphant march, and then it drops. Just when things seemed to be going smoothly. Great hook.

  4. I hope she can give him the help he needs...

  5. I hope there is something good around the corner for seti!

  6. The image you create of Seti being carried by the fairies is a beautiful one. Lovely work.

  7. I'll have to read some back posts to learn more about this imaginative story. It sounds interesting.

  8. At last. Seti's been through so much. Chaos is quiet and the fairies have him. YAY!!