Sunday, April 19, 2015

WeWriWar 99 Demon and Fairy

Welcome to a new excerpt of Demon and Fairy for the Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.

In the previous episodes: Seti let the chaos got out of him as the father of his sister's fiance threaten to break the engagement. Wild, he flies to the beach to see the only person near whom he can get rid of the Chaos without pain, the fairy Kallisto in the Human world below his. He can only observe her through a tidal pool. But this time, she is in danger. Trying to rescue her from a snake, Seti lands in the world below. However, as Kallisto tries to touch him, he flies away back to his hidden place on the beach and listen to Kallisto's conversation with her best friend Kelpie who once again proposes to “It is the first time the Chaos manifested,” Seti’s father answered clenching his fists. “Then it is bad luck, he shouldn’t have been born in the first place, and he shouldn’t have stayed alive once born. Now, you can start blaming yourself for everything that is going to happen if he lets you live long enough to see it. We can’t be sure.” The man said without even looking back. He followed his companion through the corridor to the kitchen door. her and is refused. Kallisto needs to choose between Kelpie or going back to the fairy world to marry prince Kordelius. As the night comes, Kallisto goes home and so does Seti and of course his parents are all weird... (Remember, Seti used his forbidden power and left without an explanation... ) Then Seti was mysteriously pushed in his room, in the dark and apparently turned blind. For the past few weeks, Seti is trying to control the Chaos who wants to take over his body. We had some flash back to explain the relationship between Seti and the Chaos. Seti managed to open a hole in the wall while keeping the Chaos away, but how long can he stay in control? 

Here are my 8 sentences, we start where we left off last week. Seti had stopped to wait and see what the others would do.

A brown, little fairy flew above Seti’s face and kissed him on the nose.
“I know he is nice,” Kallisto said a bit jealous. He had said not to touch him and she didn’t dare to try.
The brown, little fairy flew in front of her and started to make big noises.
“It’s a good idea, Cinnamon, but I’m going to need everybody’s help, and you’ll have to be very careful not to drop him by getting distracted,” Kallisto answered.
Kallisto stood up and the fairies made a circle around Seti. Cinnamon was pushing the more reluctant ones to come help too. Plants started to grow below Seti, they seemed to be growing faster and faster, Kallisto moved her hands like a conductor and seemed to be pulling them out of the ground. 

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  1. Oh, neat! I like what they are doing!

  2. Wonderful imagery. I could see the plants growing around Seti.

  3. I hope something good is about to happen for him.

  4. What a great visual image the fairy circle is. Good stuff.

  5. Combined effort always works. Great description of the scene ... and I love the name cinnamon.