Sunday, February 1, 2015

WeWriWar 88 Demon and Fairy

Hello everyone and welcome to a new excerpt of Demon and Fairy for the Week-end Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.

Let's continue our demon's story (I'll get to 100 Then hopefully you'll have my new novel to enjoy)! 

In the previous episodes: Seti let the chaos got out of him as the father of his sister's fiance threaten to break the engagement. Wild, he flies to the beach to see the only person near whom he can get rid of the Chaos without pain, the fairy Kallisto in the Human world below his. He can only observe her through a tidal pool. But this time, she is in danger. Trying to rescue her from a snake, Seti lands in the world below. However, as Kallisto tries to touch him, he flies away back to his hidden place on the beach and listen to Kallisto's conversation with her best friend Kelpie who once again proposes to her and is refused. Kallisto needs to choose between Kelpie or going back to the fairy world to marry prince Kordelius. As the night comes, Kallisto goes home and so does Seti and of course his parents are all weird... (Remember, Seti used his forbidden power and left without an explanation... ) Then Seti was mysteriously pushed in his room, in the dark and apparently turned blind. For the past few weeks, Seti is trying to control the Chaos who wants to take over his body. We had some flash back to explain the relationship between Seti and the Chaos. Now Seti seems to be in control again but for how long?

Here are my 8 sentences, we start where we left off last week. Now that the Chaos has calmed down, Seti is looking for the way out. 

 The hole was done. He continued to transform the molecules around, just to be sure.
“What do you mean?” The Chaos asked. For the first time it seemed that he didn’t have all the answers, and Seti was glad it had stopped to use the first person to talk about him, it made him feel insane.
“Read my mind,” Seti said, walking carefully out.
He didn’t want to meet anyone. He didn’t know how long he would be able to keep the Chaos inside him if someone arrived.

Answer to last week's comments

Yes, Seti is going to discover something big about himself and possibly others. I think it was the worse time possible to get out of the room because the Chaos doesn't seem like he is going to spit it out so easily. 
But what is really Seti's true nature? Should he really embrace the Chaos and do as if everything was ok or is it better to struggle?

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  1. I picture Seti walking around looking as if he is talking to himself. I bet he doesn't feel a bit insane. :)

  2. The Chaos doesn't seem to spit out any information without a fight.

  3. I don't think struggling has gotten him very far. Maybe it is time to explore the power and take control of it instead of letting it control him. Always intrigued when I read your snippets.

  4. Interesting how the relationship between Seti and the Chaos is evolving. Enjoyed the excerpt!

  5. Good work. You've managed to maintain a sense of being unbalanced in this sequence.

  6. Great excerpt! Can't wait to see what happens next! Hope you are having a great start to 2015 :)

  7. Great excerpt! Can't wait to see what happens next! Hope you are having a great start to 2015 :)

  8. I can almost picture Seti with 2 figures on his shoulders, both him but one dressed as an angel and one dressed as a devil and poor Seti not sure who to listen to.