Sunday, May 11, 2014

Demon and Fairy WeWriWar 50

Hello everyone !

Welcome to Week-end Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.

I'm back to Japan. I run out of internet for the end of last week but now things should go very smoothly. Have fun with a new part of Demon and Fairy.

In the previous episodes: Seti was in pain and flying to see Kallisto who is the only person who can help him get rid of it. He remembered how he had met her the first time but unfortunately this time it was late at night and she was nowhere to be seen. Seti couldn't spend the night on the Beach and decided to fly home not noticing that another demon entered her house. We followed Seti and discovered his chaotic bedroom before meeting his family for breakfast. They were arguing about Seti's sister's arranged wedding being canceled by the other family and Samira was crying. Their father said that Seti would just have to apologize. and we learn what Seti thinks about the situation. Seti met the twin's father and gave him an unexpected apology demon style which scared everyone around except Taram who had been spying at the scene from the stairs with his twin brother Torin. After the confrontation, as always when he has a headache, Seti flew to the beach and fell asleep near the tidal pool. When Seti waked, he saw Kallisto facing a snake he managed to get through the barrier and stop it from attacking her, at the moment he is about to kill the snake, Kallisto tells him to stop and had him let the snake on the other side of the barrier. Then Seti had an unexpected reaction but Kallisto didn't going to let him go that easily. Kallisto seems to have a very strange combination of people taking care of the security of the house, which scares Seti a little bit while Kallisto seems to consider that he is her best protection. He decided to fly away then notice the arrival of Kelpie. Kelpie had just ask Kallisto if he has already told her about Kordelius' ugliness. Seti is still around listening to their conversation. Kelpie is going straight to the point. Seti wanted to run away, but still decided to stay. Kelpie continues to tell Kallisto she should married her so she decided to give him a love test. Kallisto asked him: "What do you love about me?" Seti's answered in his head, then we saw Kelpie's answer to Kallisto and the argument that follows. Then Kelpie is gone and Kallisto is waiting for Seti to come back until it's time to go back home but he doesn't appear. Today we are starting on Chapter 3 and Seti is back home, a bit late for diner. 

Here are my 8 sentences, beginning of Chapter 3. (Of course, "he" is Seti).


As he approached the house he heard his sister’s laughter coming from her bedroom. She was with Taram, at least he had fixed that. He took a deep breath getting ready before pushing the kitchen’s door. His parents seemed to have been arguing. His father was reading the newspaper and didn’t even look up. He was always reading after an argument.
“Oh, you’re back,” his mother said smiling at him. “I kept you some dinner warm, sit down.”

Something is clearly wrong....
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4 comments:

  1. I'm glad his mother's happy to see him. I wonder how his dad will react, given he isn't even acknowledging his presence. Interesting 8!

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  2. I like his Mom! Another fascinating snippet today, getting a glimpse of Seti's home life.

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  3. Wonder if his parents aren't speaking because of his sister?

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  4. It sounds like he really had to brace himself to go in the door.

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